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*squeaks in delight*
This awesome comic was done by the amazing
Tan
If you're not familiar with his work, please head on over to his page and check out his gallery. And be sure to leave some Fav's and Comments on his posting of this picture, here:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3481698/
Rodent was just looking to get a drink from the pond, when he noticed the rather large frog looking his way. Before he had a chance to react, he found himself being snatched up by the frog's sticky tongue, and getting an up close and personal view of his gullet and stomach. :)
I love how this came out. Tan's style is simply beautiful, and the frog's tongue and mouth is truly wonderful. And the final frame with the frog just happily relaxing back and digesting its ratty meal, has me giggling in delight.
My thanks to Tan for taking this commission and doing such an amazing job with it.
Artwork © Tan
Rodent ©
Prowler7
This awesome comic was done by the amazing
TanIf you're not familiar with his work, please head on over to his page and check out his gallery. And be sure to leave some Fav's and Comments on his posting of this picture, here:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3481698/
Rodent was just looking to get a drink from the pond, when he noticed the rather large frog looking his way. Before he had a chance to react, he found himself being snatched up by the frog's sticky tongue, and getting an up close and personal view of his gullet and stomach. :)
I love how this came out. Tan's style is simply beautiful, and the frog's tongue and mouth is truly wonderful. And the final frame with the frog just happily relaxing back and digesting its ratty meal, has me giggling in delight.
My thanks to Tan for taking this commission and doing such an amazing job with it.
Artwork ©
TanRodent ©
Prowler7Category All / Vore
Species Frog
Size 1280 x 1000px
File Size 1.05 MB
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The layout of this panel is bad.
You laid the panel out in a backwards "N" comic panel format. (Top Left, Bottom Left, Top Right, Bottom Right)
This is does not flow easily for the eyes. It's very abrupt transitions that break the flow of movement from panel to panel. It destroys immersion for the reader.
I suggest using a "Z" comic panel format. (Top Left, Top Right, Bottom Left, Bottom Right).
I would suggest reading Scout McCloud's 'Making Comics' and 'Understanding Comics' if you want to get better at making comics. Lots of useful information and a fun read.
You laid the panel out in a backwards "N" comic panel format. (Top Left, Bottom Left, Top Right, Bottom Right)
This is does not flow easily for the eyes. It's very abrupt transitions that break the flow of movement from panel to panel. It destroys immersion for the reader.
I suggest using a "Z" comic panel format. (Top Left, Top Right, Bottom Left, Bottom Right).
I would suggest reading Scout McCloud's 'Making Comics' and 'Understanding Comics' if you want to get better at making comics. Lots of useful information and a fun read.
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