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This is a commissioned story I did for someone on tumblr featuring MY OC's, Koloss, Hakari and Nara. In fact, this is a direct sequel to this comic series I commissioned from 
IncredibleEdibleCalico many moons ago, wherein Hakari attempts to rescue Nara, only to find she's been eaten by her assailant, and now, Hakari's next on the menu...
IncredibleEdibleCalico many moons ago, wherein Hakari attempts to rescue Nara, only to find she's been eaten by her assailant, and now, Hakari's next on the menu...
Category Story / Vore
Species Alligator / Crocodile
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 120.5 kB
This is, in my opinion, the best thing you've written so far. I love Koloss to itty bitty bits (which there could be MANY of, with his decidedly NOT itty-bitty size), and this just has everything one could enjoy from you on HIS front. The action, the humor, the deeper elements with he and Nara's relationship, and even his doubts about his showing mercy...it's all handled brilliantly, as well. And despite being as long as it is, it's quite a quick and well-paced read.
Or maybe that's just the fact I read fast, generally speaking. XD
ANYWAY, keep up the great work!
Sincerely,
The Cheshire Cat's Master
Or maybe that's just the fact I read fast, generally speaking. XD
ANYWAY, keep up the great work!
Sincerely,
The Cheshire Cat's Master
Thank you VERY much for that, my friend! I appreciate that tremendously and am very glad you enjoyed this story as much as you did! :)
Yeaaaaah, if you diced this big fatso up, you could make quiiiite a few purses, as Nara would probably LOVE to do after what she's just endured. :P But I'm glad you enjoyed all those elements, especially the scenes at the end with Hakari and Nara. I always want their bits together to be sweet...but not TOO sweet, since Nara IS about as blunt as a brick to the crotch. XD
I hope you enjoy what's to come, amigo! And thank you very kindly for all the kind words! They are very deeply appreciated. ;)
Yeaaaaah, if you diced this big fatso up, you could make quiiiite a few purses, as Nara would probably LOVE to do after what she's just endured. :P But I'm glad you enjoyed all those elements, especially the scenes at the end with Hakari and Nara. I always want their bits together to be sweet...but not TOO sweet, since Nara IS about as blunt as a brick to the crotch. XD
I hope you enjoy what's to come, amigo! And thank you very kindly for all the kind words! They are very deeply appreciated. ;)
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