
Superhero sketch CRITIQUE STRONGLY ENCOURAGED
Critiques, especially helping with the arms and dynamicism are greatly appreciated!
This is the superhero form of my roomates character. she's in a cape, is supposed to be relatively small chested for a superhero and also athletic. She is holding a chakram, though I'm having some difficulty drawing one. Redlines would be most appreciated!
This is the superhero form of my roomates character. she's in a cape, is supposed to be relatively small chested for a superhero and also athletic. She is holding a chakram, though I'm having some difficulty drawing one. Redlines would be most appreciated!
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Human
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 682 x 586px
File Size 87 kB
like Blitz, I'd say legs and hips. myself, I would add a pronounced fold of flesh above the rim of her leotard, on the right, where the skin would actually fold a bit following the pose. also, I would thicken the upper legs by at least 50%, pronounce her butt with it, and even out the underline of it on the right. it's a mistake I used to make myself for many years, along with adding muscle bulges where I should not. :P
the upper arm on the left needs more mass. the right one looks alright, pose, too. the neck is a bit thin, I would try and shift the left line a bit more left and more vertical. or try if you can't follow the lines created by muscles and sinews of the neck musculature there.
the chakram looks good to me, although with me it would look like the hubcap rim of a '64 Cadillac. then again, I'm an automobilist, so sue me. :)
as for dynamics, I would try and lift the edge of her cape a bit with the same wind that ruffles her hair. try lifting the right corner of it, following the line which starts at her shoulder.
I hope that helps, with Blitzens redlines.
the upper arm on the left needs more mass. the right one looks alright, pose, too. the neck is a bit thin, I would try and shift the left line a bit more left and more vertical. or try if you can't follow the lines created by muscles and sinews of the neck musculature there.
the chakram looks good to me, although with me it would look like the hubcap rim of a '64 Cadillac. then again, I'm an automobilist, so sue me. :)
as for dynamics, I would try and lift the edge of her cape a bit with the same wind that ruffles her hair. try lifting the right corner of it, following the line which starts at her shoulder.
I hope that helps, with Blitzens redlines.
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