nice =D

i'm lovin it

:D

still enjoy the accordian
keep it up

Awesome! I can't wait to hear the finished version

Aye! Me neither.^^

You should create some sort of story, like some ship's cook gets tired of working for pirates and finally snaps, and either goes on a mad rampage with cooking utensils or adds some ungodly new ingredient to the slop. :P

hehe. happy ends are boring, aren't they?

Well, it's completelöy contrary to what I wrote so far, but sounds veerry interesting. Maybe he adds some kind of voodoo ingredient to curse the whole crew^^
I'll think about that. Thank you very much for the creative input! Vera appreciated!!

I found out what he should add to the food: "Chile Loco"! (or mexican insanity peppers) All the rum in the world couldn't save them from peppers that hot!

lol
That seems a bit far-fetched to me^^

How so?

*points to the comment box below^^*

Never heard from a pirate who died due to a chili....or alcohol intoxication XD

um...they should all die in the end, shouldn't they?^^

Well, all the dumb ones. The cool kickass pirates should side with the cook and help him, and maybe even start a new crew!

Sounds almost like an happy ending to me. *frowns*

unless they return as undead and kill the rest of the crew^^

Aw hell yeah!

You said you had some of the lyrics written. What are they?

(Intro-Chorus)
Smutje, Smutje, Smutje! Hey!
Smutje, Smutje! Hey! Hey! Hey!
Who cheers us up when we feel low and wet from tip to toe?
Smutje, Smutje! Yo-ho-ho!

(Verse 1)
We pillage every port from north to south across the sea.
We rifle and sack, say ‘what the heck’, it fills us up with glee.
When they see the Jolly Roger on our mast.
All the lubbers try to get off the harbor really fast.
But after that, when we get back on the ship, our wooden lair,
a lovely scent right from the caboose is gonna tint the air.

(Chorus)
Smutje, Smutje,
The warden of our meat.
Smutje, Smutje!
He serves the finest treat.
Without this lad we’d all be dead,
we all could feed the fishes,
if our Smutje wouldn’t smack
his greasy grub on our dishes.

...so far

Good stuff! If you want to go with my idea, I suggest a verse or two from the smutje's point of view. If not, go wild!

I thought about putting it into the last verse but keep the tellers-POV (or whatever is the right term) And the last chorus will definetely be....different^^