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So hey, finally found the time to write while in solitary, wheeee.
Anyways, I've become smitten with Beastars. If this does well I might do more based on Legosi or other characters in the anime. Let me know if you all like it!
Anyways, I've become smitten with Beastars. If this does well I might do more based on Legosi or other characters in the anime. Let me know if you all like it!
Category Story / Macro / Micro
Species Wolf
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 68.8 kB
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Hmm, cute enough stuff, mind, it feels more like the beginning of a longer story, with him taking care of you or surviving something more than this. That said, good word choices, nice prose, very good use of descriptors. Only shame I find is no interaction with mouse sized students as well, like they're so big you're a mouse to them when you try to run to the edges of the hallway, only for them to knock you back into the center sort of thing.
Heh, well, good ideas depend on how you want to do the story. General Macro/Micro stuff would include things like, him leaving you on a desk in his room as he tries to study, sipping at a drink, then noticing you appear thirsty, and running his finger over the side of his can/glass, gathering up the condensation that he then drips beside you for you to drink.
Of course, something will Bill or Louis might be fun too, say Bill just wants to play with you, regardless of what damage he does, and Louis is...well, his asshole self and just has contempt for you for his own reasons, all while Legosi tries to protect you. Or Haru can decide to use you for some fun with him.
Mind, for my favorite, some unaware vore stuff will always win out, with him nearly swallowing you, before finally hearing you in his throat, and spitting you back out just before he makes a meal of you permanently after trying to share his lunch.
Of course, something will Bill or Louis might be fun too, say Bill just wants to play with you, regardless of what damage he does, and Louis is...well, his asshole self and just has contempt for you for his own reasons, all while Legosi tries to protect you. Or Haru can decide to use you for some fun with him.
Mind, for my favorite, some unaware vore stuff will always win out, with him nearly swallowing you, before finally hearing you in his throat, and spitting you back out just before he makes a meal of you permanently after trying to share his lunch.
Heh, I'm more for sandwich/burger stuff, but that's a classic food choice too. Also, yeah. Bill would be mostly just the sort to lord it over you, not caring about hurting you, just wanting to be powerful, meanwhile, Louis is fucked up in the head, and really seems to have a hate boner for those who are, in his opinion, 'weak'. Understandable, given his backstory, but still.
Either way, if you ever need a nudge on a story idea, I'm good for those if nothing else.
Either way, if you ever need a nudge on a story idea, I'm good for those if nothing else.
This was a very cute story, what I really like is that Legosi is very suitable for the task because of his gentle nature towards little things. Since there's rodents, maybe he could get rodent sized furniture? He might need a new box though, but its an idea anywho. Overall, its a well thought out story!
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