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This is a commissioned story I did on tumblr which once again features my OC’s, this time, it’s the villain Cadmus who takes the center stage. And in this tale, Cadmus dispatches a renown steroid kingpin referred to as ‘The Bodfather’. And after defeating and devouring him, things take a rather unexpected and unpleasant turn for our neutral villainous snake-man. ;)
In general, this is partially out of character for Cadmus, but I was able to make the scenario work enough for it to still feel in line with him and still have fun with it. :P
In general, this is partially out of character for Cadmus, but I was able to make the scenario work enough for it to still feel in line with him and still have fun with it. :P
Category Story / Vore
Species Snake / Serpent
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 123.3 kB
It's good to see Cadmus in his own story, at last, even if it isn't entirely the way you'd imagine things working, so to speak. He's a fun, slippery character (well...until the almighty power of a gut-ache kicks in, but that'll unruffle anybody, just about), and the action sequences were great...as, of course, were the more voracious and burpy portions.
If I have one piece of criticism, at times the font(s) used for the belches and grumbles was kind of hard to read in this case. You may want to tone things down or use a different font. Just a suggestion for future reference. Overall though, excellent work!
Sincerely,
The Cheshire Cat's Master
If I have one piece of criticism, at times the font(s) used for the belches and grumbles was kind of hard to read in this case. You may want to tone things down or use a different font. Just a suggestion for future reference. Overall though, excellent work!
Sincerely,
The Cheshire Cat's Master
Thank you kindly as always, amigo! Glad you liked Cadmus' story debut even if, again, it's not QUITE how I personally envision him. :P
I'll definitely try and use a few more easier fonts in the future. I mainly was going for whichever fonts felt "hefty" and "bubbly." But I can see them being a bit tricky to make out. Fortunately, DaFont still has about a billion other fonts I can seek out to make up the difference. ;)
I'll definitely try and use a few more easier fonts in the future. I mainly was going for whichever fonts felt "hefty" and "bubbly." But I can see them being a bit tricky to make out. Fortunately, DaFont still has about a billion other fonts I can seek out to make up the difference. ;)
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