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Yup, done, after months! i promise this is a good chapter, first decent thing that has happened in the story so far XD
Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Horse
Size 120 x 89px
File Size 5.5 kB
See that's what you don't want to do..
Write something when you are half asleep just to get it outhere.
It shows in what I saw in all of the sentence miscues and structure.
A good rule of thumb I use is write when you know you are fresh meaning having a full night sleep. I'm sure if you were well rested the story would of turned out better.
You might want to consider looking at the links I've provided for Writers Block and FA Writers on my channel description page.
I know you are just doing this for fun but it might be worth your time to send this entire series to the FA Writers or Writers Block to get some real feedback to steer you the right way.
I'm no better then you are when it comes to fine tuning this stuff and getting enough sleep. The fact is I sleep but it is not as satisfying as I want it to be.
But anyway,
I'm just giving you some friendly advice because I started writing just like you did and then I got some help from some real good writers and readers. With their help and the help of some real good real life literature teachers I had throughout my college and school career I was able to morph it into something I could do for fun but be able to make people think about it while also being amazed by how truly open I am.
Go ahead and put me on watch if you want to. I know you are below 18 so you won't be able to view a lot of my work but I do see potential in getting better at this.
You don't have to be a Kyell, KM, or Fuzzwolf to be a real good writer. You just have to fine tune as you go and run into the right people and teachers who can help you get really good at this.
I'll get off my soap box now
Write something when you are half asleep just to get it outhere.
It shows in what I saw in all of the sentence miscues and structure.
A good rule of thumb I use is write when you know you are fresh meaning having a full night sleep. I'm sure if you were well rested the story would of turned out better.
You might want to consider looking at the links I've provided for Writers Block and FA Writers on my channel description page.
I know you are just doing this for fun but it might be worth your time to send this entire series to the FA Writers or Writers Block to get some real feedback to steer you the right way.
I'm no better then you are when it comes to fine tuning this stuff and getting enough sleep. The fact is I sleep but it is not as satisfying as I want it to be.
But anyway,
I'm just giving you some friendly advice because I started writing just like you did and then I got some help from some real good writers and readers. With their help and the help of some real good real life literature teachers I had throughout my college and school career I was able to morph it into something I could do for fun but be able to make people think about it while also being amazed by how truly open I am.
Go ahead and put me on watch if you want to. I know you are below 18 so you won't be able to view a lot of my work but I do see potential in getting better at this.
You don't have to be a Kyell, KM, or Fuzzwolf to be a real good writer. You just have to fine tune as you go and run into the right people and teachers who can help you get really good at this.
I'll get off my soap box now
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