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Melodies Of Life CH2
since all the problems happening around the world, and not really managing to really focus on the new chapter I am working on lately. I decided to completely rework chapter 2 that was posted on my Patreon.
I won't deny it, it needed quite some work on it and took me half of the night to make it.
personally I am pretty proud of the changes and improvements on it.
this is the follow up of
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/33225955/
which needs some work still, I know. hehe.
in this one you will learn more about what is starting to lurk in the darkness on Will Lawrence's new world, even more meeting his assignment.
of course, you can read FAR MORE on my Patreon, alongside more stories.
https://www.patreon.com/karmakat
and some COMICS WITH A NEW PRICE FOR IT!
as always, I don't mind comments or questions. But I won't give spoilers hehe.
STAY SAFE EVERYONE!
I won't deny it, it needed quite some work on it and took me half of the night to make it.
personally I am pretty proud of the changes and improvements on it.
this is the follow up of
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/33225955/
which needs some work still, I know. hehe.
in this one you will learn more about what is starting to lurk in the darkness on Will Lawrence's new world, even more meeting his assignment.
of course, you can read FAR MORE on my Patreon, alongside more stories.
https://www.patreon.com/karmakat
and some COMICS WITH A NEW PRICE FOR IT!
as always, I don't mind comments or questions. But I won't give spoilers hehe.
STAY SAFE EVERYONE!
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The file you posted on here shows quite a few typos. Also, there are several instances where a sentence splits.
As for the writing of the story and characters: Will is right to be a hard-ass to everyone who judges him ever so harshly. I sort of relate to Stuart. I need support from my parents, but they might not call me out on my problems. Unlike him, though, I know occasionally when I bring something on myself. I can't believe how hard Stuart pushes his family away when he's going through trauma. Post-Traumatic Stress is not a disorder; it's a mental condition. I hope to learn why Stuart doesn't tell people about his trauma.
As for the writing of the story and characters: Will is right to be a hard-ass to everyone who judges him ever so harshly. I sort of relate to Stuart. I need support from my parents, but they might not call me out on my problems. Unlike him, though, I know occasionally when I bring something on myself. I can't believe how hard Stuart pushes his family away when he's going through trauma. Post-Traumatic Stress is not a disorder; it's a mental condition. I hope to learn why Stuart doesn't tell people about his trauma.
thanks for reading and your message.
honestly, the sentence splits part I think it's mostly because I did a bad adaptation from .Doc to .HTML at this rate because it normally doesn't do that.
concerning Will, well his past made him who he is. but Stuart's behavior and his sister toward him well you can read further on my Patreon or just wait until that chapter happens in here.
or in the book when it's finished.
getting there at least. hehe I am on ch 20 for THAT novel.
but REALLY THANKS A LOT!
honestly, the sentence splits part I think it's mostly because I did a bad adaptation from .Doc to .HTML at this rate because it normally doesn't do that.
concerning Will, well his past made him who he is. but Stuart's behavior and his sister toward him well you can read further on my Patreon or just wait until that chapter happens in here.
or in the book when it's finished.
getting there at least. hehe I am on ch 20 for THAT novel.
but REALLY THANKS A LOT!
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