i don't really look at many poems or comment, so it's harder ot know what to put. but this seems to be written just right though. it expresses things well. this isn't much of a comment i know. oh well.

Hmm, well your use of two and only two punctuation kinda throws me off here so im reading this as one big loooonnnngggggg sad sad and emotional sentence. I don't, once again, see any flow to it. Thus, im going to have to give you a 3 in artistry. However, the deep feelings and meaning in it can almost be felt PULSING though your words like blood through a freashly opened vein. THat said, -10 points for obvious emoness. FInally, you recieve a technical score of 7 for actually writing it. so a grand total of!!! NOTHING. THE BLACKEST GIFT OF ALL!

very critical analysis of my poetry if a must say but a lil harsh meh

very well expressed *hugs* i felt what you feeling