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A Friend in Need | A Good Fit Chp.1
Logline: When Richard's bed collapses under his weight, he finds himself stuck in the caved mattress and frame and calls a friend for help. Except, before can pop the awkward question, she interrupts with the offer of having him join her for a meal. Luckily for him, she shows up with excess take-away and the resolve to get his chunky ass free. But, she has a favor to ask of him, too... (SFW fluff piece)
v is for voluptuous curves. Read on to get the (bad) joke.
Illustrations? :O https://www.furaffinity.net/view/36090226/
not too bad for 4 am writing. I'm happy. it was self-indulgent
v is for voluptuous curves. Read on to get the (bad) joke.
Illustrations? :O https://www.furaffinity.net/view/36090226/
not too bad for 4 am writing. I'm happy. it was self-indulgent
Category Story / Fat Furs
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That was a really cute story and you did a fantastic job selling the sheer size of Richard there. From being a certified bed breaker to physically incapable of lifting himself you did good with all those descriptions of his bulk, the way it flattened when he laid on it or bunched up about his face and how it deformed around Gina then snapped back when she got up. All very tactile descriptions of a massive body which I loved.
You also gave us a very good feel for both characters, Richard being ambivalent over his growth as he outsizes pretty much everything in his house and Gina certainly enjoying Richards company and being more than happy to assist him in addressing his needs as far as appetite goes were cute cute little moments.
I would be very happy to see these characters again if you ever plan on doing additional stories.
You also gave us a very good feel for both characters, Richard being ambivalent over his growth as he outsizes pretty much everything in his house and Gina certainly enjoying Richards company and being more than happy to assist him in addressing his needs as far as appetite goes were cute cute little moments.
I would be very happy to see these characters again if you ever plan on doing additional stories.
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