Another exercise quite worthy of my time. This really made me think hard about what my characters can and can't do, and just how... powerful certain characters are.

I was surprised that Jake actually received a negative score, but considering just how far gone he is, it shouldn't have been much of a shocker. I don't worry about Shade having such a high score, either, since she's "earned" it.

The original can be found here: [link]
Try it if you need an exercise in story balance.

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