What a big change, if you see at comparred like this~ :3

yay :3

So I see some improvement, but a lot of the problems that are present before are present now and from my perspective the improvement isn't so vast. Try to look at some models, and try to break the figure down into shapes. You want a fluid figure that doesn't seem stiff or forced. Don't make up how to draw things like hair or the face. Look for reference. Find an artist of a few that you like and emulate some of the style choices they make. These art things that I still do to this day and they are the habits that help you improve, so forming them is really the best practices for artists of all calibers. If you do that, then do another one of these in 6 months, I bet you will see a vast improvement XD Best of luck!

thank you a lot! welll this style has been recently made :P i just woke up two weeks ago like...."i think i am gonna re do my style totally!" as as crazy as it sounds is did from the start, looked for many references as you sugest and I am happy how has arrive until now, but of course i will keep practicing on it :3 looks better but isnt still good ebough :P thanks for the critic i find it pretty usefull :3

I'm glad to help! I'm always worried when I say stuff like this it will seem too harsh, so I'm glad it was helpful, mate! Cheers and keep drawing =^.^=