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Here's chapter 2 of My Little Aladdin. Hope you'll like it.
Chapter 2
-The next morning in Ponyville-
Running across the rooftops was a stallion with a pale, light grayish olive mane, moderate sap green eyes, light freckles on the cheeks, and three red apples for his cutie mark named Applejack, but everypony else just calls him AJ for short. In his brown bag was a loaf of bread that he stole from a bread stand. Behind him was four guards. Three of them were white coated pegasai ponies with blue manes, yellow eyes, and royal shields for cutie marks. Their leader was a minotaur named Iron Will. "Stop thief!" Iron Will shouted as AJ stopped at the edge of the building he was running on. "I'll have your hooves for a trophy, street-pony!" AJ looked at the bread in his bag and said "All this for a loaf of bread?" He shrugged and said "Ah, well." before he jumped off the edge.
He landed on two ropes strung between buildings, with drying clothes on them. He skied down on them, collecting bits and pieces of clothing on him as he went down. Finally, he was nearing the end of rope, and at a window, a mare screamed, reached out, and slammed the shutters shut. As the shutters were closed, AJ slammed into the shutters and fell into the street. His fall was broken by numerous awnings and the pile of clothes around him. He pulled the layers of clothes off of him, and caught the loaf of bread before it landed on the ground. Just as AJ was about to enjoy his bread, one of the pegasai pony guard said "There he is!" "You won't get away so easy!" the second pegasai pony guard shouted. "Ya'll think that was easy?" AJ asked. Just then three mares laughed at AJ, and he just shrugged with embarassment. He then heard Iron Will talking to his pegasai pony guards. "You two, over that way." Iron Will said to two of the pegasai pony guards before saying to the pegasai pony guard next to him "And you, follow me! We'll find him!" AJ quickly grabbed a yellow sheet, and wrapped himself up in it as a disguise before he went up to mares that were laughing at him earlier. "Morning, mares!" AJ greeted.
"Getting into trouble a little early today, aren't we AJ?" An earth pony with a pale, light grayish rose mane with light ceriseish gray streaks, grayish harlequin eyes, and three smiling flowers for her cutie mark named Cheerliee said. "Trouble?" AJ asked before he laughed a bit. "No way! You're only in trouble if ya'll get caught. Just as he said that, he was grabbed from behind by Iron Will. "Gotcha!" Iron Will said as the disguise that AJ was wearing earlier fell off. "Ah'm in trouble!" AJ said as he gulped. Iron Will smirked and said "And this time-!" But before he could say anything else, a barrel landed on his head, and standing on the barrel was a dragon with purple scales, and green spikes named Spike.
AJ tipped his hat and said "Perfect timing, Spike! As usual." "Hello, AJ!" Spike said as he jumped onto his friend's back. "Come on. let's get out of here!" AJ said as he started to run with the guards hot on his tail. AJ and Spike ran for a while and when they were surronded by the guards, AJ grabbed a carpet, and he and Spike jumped out the window. The guards followed him out the window, but they fell straight down and landed in a pile of manuere. AJ used the carpet as a parachute to land safely and out of danger." AJ and Spike high-fived each other, and AJ tore the bread in two and gave the half to his dragon friend, and said "And now esteemed effendi, we feast! All right!" But before AJ took a bite, he saw a colt named Pipsqueak, and a filly named Sweetie Belle looking through the garbage for food.
AJ felt pity for them before he looked at Spike who just glared and took a bite of his bread. AJ sighed and walked over to Pipsqueak and Sweetie Belle, and gives them the bread. "Here, go on, take it." Sweetie Belle took the bread, and giggled when AJ ruffled her mane with his hoof. As AJ walked away, Spike suddenly felt bad, and he then walked over to Pipsqueak. "Uh..here you go." Spike said as he gave the colt his bread. Sweetie Belle looked at Spike and started to tickle him. "Ah, don't." Spike said before he started to laugh when Sweetie Belle started to tickle him even further. Then Spike heard a noise. He followed AJ and jumped on his back. AJ peered over the shoulders of the other ponies to see a unicorn with a light amber mane, light brilliant arctic blue eyes, a white prince's outfit, and a rose compass for his cutie mark named Prince Blueblood who was riding on a blue horse-drawn carriage pulled by a servant pony.
"On his way to the castle in Canterlot, I suppose." a bystander pony said. "Another suitor for the princess." another bystander pony said. Just then, Pipsqeak and Sweetie Belle ran out in front of Prince Blueblood's carriage causing it to stop. The prince growled. held out his whip with his magic, and shouted "Out of my way you filthy brats!" Prince Blueblood unleashed his whip to attack the filly and the colt, but AJ jumped out in front of them, caught the whip, and said "HEY! If Ah were as rich as ya'll, Ah could afford some manners!" before he tossed the whip in the rude prince's face. "Oh, I'll teach YOU some manners!" Prince Blueblood said as he kicked AJ and Spike into the mud puddle, and the crowd laughed at them. "Yuck!" Spike said as he wiped the mud off of himself. AJ stood up, and said "Look at that, Spike! It's not everyday you see a pony with two rear ends!"
The carriage stopped as Prince Blueblood turned back to AJ, and said "You are a worthless street-pony. You were born a street-pony, you'll die a street-pony, and only your fleas will mourn you!" Those words made AJ very mad. He rushed at Prince Blueblood, but the doors to Canterlot slammed shut in his face. He rubbed on his snout to sooth the pain, glared up at the door, and said "Ah ain't worthless! And Ah don't have fleas!" As AJ scratched his head, to find that he does have fleas, Spike went up to him and said "Forget it, AJ. He's not worth it." AJ sighed, and said "Come on, Spike. Let's go home." Spike jumped on AJ's back, as they headed home. As AJ walked, he couldn't help, but feel sad. He was so sick and tired of being treated like a street-pony when he knows he could be so much more. It was bad enough that he was treated as a blank flank when he was a young colt before he finally got his cutie mark.
When they arrived at an old abandoned farm on the edge of Ponyville, they went upstairs, and Spike laid in his bed as he fell asleep and AJ tucked him in. AJ looked out the window which showed the view of Canterlot, and said "Someday, Spike, things are gonna change. We'll be rich, live in a castle, and never have any problems at all."
Chapter 2
-The next morning in Ponyville-
Running across the rooftops was a stallion with a pale, light grayish olive mane, moderate sap green eyes, light freckles on the cheeks, and three red apples for his cutie mark named Applejack, but everypony else just calls him AJ for short. In his brown bag was a loaf of bread that he stole from a bread stand. Behind him was four guards. Three of them were white coated pegasai ponies with blue manes, yellow eyes, and royal shields for cutie marks. Their leader was a minotaur named Iron Will. "Stop thief!" Iron Will shouted as AJ stopped at the edge of the building he was running on. "I'll have your hooves for a trophy, street-pony!" AJ looked at the bread in his bag and said "All this for a loaf of bread?" He shrugged and said "Ah, well." before he jumped off the edge.
He landed on two ropes strung between buildings, with drying clothes on them. He skied down on them, collecting bits and pieces of clothing on him as he went down. Finally, he was nearing the end of rope, and at a window, a mare screamed, reached out, and slammed the shutters shut. As the shutters were closed, AJ slammed into the shutters and fell into the street. His fall was broken by numerous awnings and the pile of clothes around him. He pulled the layers of clothes off of him, and caught the loaf of bread before it landed on the ground. Just as AJ was about to enjoy his bread, one of the pegasai pony guard said "There he is!" "You won't get away so easy!" the second pegasai pony guard shouted. "Ya'll think that was easy?" AJ asked. Just then three mares laughed at AJ, and he just shrugged with embarassment. He then heard Iron Will talking to his pegasai pony guards. "You two, over that way." Iron Will said to two of the pegasai pony guards before saying to the pegasai pony guard next to him "And you, follow me! We'll find him!" AJ quickly grabbed a yellow sheet, and wrapped himself up in it as a disguise before he went up to mares that were laughing at him earlier. "Morning, mares!" AJ greeted.
"Getting into trouble a little early today, aren't we AJ?" An earth pony with a pale, light grayish rose mane with light ceriseish gray streaks, grayish harlequin eyes, and three smiling flowers for her cutie mark named Cheerliee said. "Trouble?" AJ asked before he laughed a bit. "No way! You're only in trouble if ya'll get caught. Just as he said that, he was grabbed from behind by Iron Will. "Gotcha!" Iron Will said as the disguise that AJ was wearing earlier fell off. "Ah'm in trouble!" AJ said as he gulped. Iron Will smirked and said "And this time-!" But before he could say anything else, a barrel landed on his head, and standing on the barrel was a dragon with purple scales, and green spikes named Spike.
AJ tipped his hat and said "Perfect timing, Spike! As usual." "Hello, AJ!" Spike said as he jumped onto his friend's back. "Come on. let's get out of here!" AJ said as he started to run with the guards hot on his tail. AJ and Spike ran for a while and when they were surronded by the guards, AJ grabbed a carpet, and he and Spike jumped out the window. The guards followed him out the window, but they fell straight down and landed in a pile of manuere. AJ used the carpet as a parachute to land safely and out of danger." AJ and Spike high-fived each other, and AJ tore the bread in two and gave the half to his dragon friend, and said "And now esteemed effendi, we feast! All right!" But before AJ took a bite, he saw a colt named Pipsqueak, and a filly named Sweetie Belle looking through the garbage for food.
AJ felt pity for them before he looked at Spike who just glared and took a bite of his bread. AJ sighed and walked over to Pipsqueak and Sweetie Belle, and gives them the bread. "Here, go on, take it." Sweetie Belle took the bread, and giggled when AJ ruffled her mane with his hoof. As AJ walked away, Spike suddenly felt bad, and he then walked over to Pipsqueak. "Uh..here you go." Spike said as he gave the colt his bread. Sweetie Belle looked at Spike and started to tickle him. "Ah, don't." Spike said before he started to laugh when Sweetie Belle started to tickle him even further. Then Spike heard a noise. He followed AJ and jumped on his back. AJ peered over the shoulders of the other ponies to see a unicorn with a light amber mane, light brilliant arctic blue eyes, a white prince's outfit, and a rose compass for his cutie mark named Prince Blueblood who was riding on a blue horse-drawn carriage pulled by a servant pony.
"On his way to the castle in Canterlot, I suppose." a bystander pony said. "Another suitor for the princess." another bystander pony said. Just then, Pipsqeak and Sweetie Belle ran out in front of Prince Blueblood's carriage causing it to stop. The prince growled. held out his whip with his magic, and shouted "Out of my way you filthy brats!" Prince Blueblood unleashed his whip to attack the filly and the colt, but AJ jumped out in front of them, caught the whip, and said "HEY! If Ah were as rich as ya'll, Ah could afford some manners!" before he tossed the whip in the rude prince's face. "Oh, I'll teach YOU some manners!" Prince Blueblood said as he kicked AJ and Spike into the mud puddle, and the crowd laughed at them. "Yuck!" Spike said as he wiped the mud off of himself. AJ stood up, and said "Look at that, Spike! It's not everyday you see a pony with two rear ends!"
The carriage stopped as Prince Blueblood turned back to AJ, and said "You are a worthless street-pony. You were born a street-pony, you'll die a street-pony, and only your fleas will mourn you!" Those words made AJ very mad. He rushed at Prince Blueblood, but the doors to Canterlot slammed shut in his face. He rubbed on his snout to sooth the pain, glared up at the door, and said "Ah ain't worthless! And Ah don't have fleas!" As AJ scratched his head, to find that he does have fleas, Spike went up to him and said "Forget it, AJ. He's not worth it." AJ sighed, and said "Come on, Spike. Let's go home." Spike jumped on AJ's back, as they headed home. As AJ walked, he couldn't help, but feel sad. He was so sick and tired of being treated like a street-pony when he knows he could be so much more. It was bad enough that he was treated as a blank flank when he was a young colt before he finally got his cutie mark.
When they arrived at an old abandoned farm on the edge of Ponyville, they went upstairs, and Spike laid in his bed as he fell asleep and AJ tucked him in. AJ looked out the window which showed the view of Canterlot, and said "Someday, Spike, things are gonna change. We'll be rich, live in a castle, and never have any problems at all."
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