oh gawd! he's evil man!! You do hand drawn animation with Vannessa?

yeah she sits two desks down from me =)

Hehe sweet. I saw her animation quite silly. I can only imagine how silly yours is XD

It looks like improvement to me.

The face is well proportioined, though the eyes on the other hand are too big in the sense that they take up way too much space of the face.
For a cartoon-ish or semi-realistic character, this style is perfect. But I would do something about the eyes.
For the rest it looks totally awesome! =3
Keep up the good work. ^^

Thanks man! I REALLY appreciate the criticism! <3

The only things I can see wrong with it are the eyes are slightly big, and the brow line seems biggish, I like it though. =3

Wow, that's awesome. It's good for someone who doesn't think they can draw humans. Try drawing someone not hunched over like that in your next human pic.

Well in terms of conveying the character's personality, i will have to disagree with most viewers here. Because i think the eye size conveys some sort of deeper malice/instability within the character. Now to let this come out a little bit stronger. i would actually reccomend to use the same style you placed in the left eye [left from our viewpoint] namely with the brow slightly covering it aswell as the signature curve, on to the right eye. to give the evil undertone a slight bit more umph to it. just be sure not to overdo it. for with the left eye the brow is just low enough, just for the right it needs to be just a little lower to cover the top of the eye, to indicate its there. and dont forget to atleast mildly redo the same shape.

other than that rather descriptive way to move just one eyebrow. you got one solid character there.

Yah the eyes are bleeding onto the side plane of the head. Otherwise, well, you know Kurt, he's PERFECT. XD

XDDDDD

Looks awesome to me. When I saw the thumbnail, I thought the customer only had white eyes. Might look cooler that way actually - call him a corporate zombie.. =3

Eyes were mentioned above. Forehead slopes perhaps just a bit much for realism, but for drawings, this is fine, dude. :3

I can give some pointers if ya want. =3

But it looks awesome! Love his expression. x3

yeah man, if you have any criticism I would love to hear it!

Okay. =3

Well, I'm no expert, but with humans, the eyes should be a bit smaller. You've got the color spot on, but the size needs to be scaled down a smidge. Remember that the eyes are always at least a little ways down from the hairline. =3

And the hair, if its gonna curl around like that, needs to be a little bigger. You're dimensions are great, its just a little bit of size.

the rest is just perfect. Shoulder thickness, ear placing, neck positioning... just the eyes and hair is what sticks out to em. you're reaaaaally good. =3

I dunno.. it kinda looks like a villain character you'd see in a WB cartoon or something, so if that's what you're going for you're on the right track.

Neopagan sorta said what I was gonna say.

my only qualms about this is how his right eye looks rather too large for his head, how much of a brow he has, and his hair line seems a bit high like its a toupee but you have succeeded in making him look rather devious