Ooh, nice!

I like the smaller muzzles too... it makes them look more cartoony and show-appropriate, though your normal MLP style with more horse-like muzzles is super appealing as well.

Thanks.

I didn't try to make their muzzles smaller and prefer the way that I usually draw them; it just sort of happened for some reason. Not sure why but I was having difficulty with them in this one.

I am not an mlp fan, but I gotta say this is pretty cute.

Thanks!

Gosh, the fact this is a series is going to be quite fun because FlutterShy is legit quite the cutie as it is, but she's really great in your style I gotta say!

So awesome job on this first part of this series. Really loving the body language and workout cloth she's in on the picture on the right and and the cute look on her face makes it all the more delicious~
And on the left, this situation is a classic but always a favorite of mine, mixed with another fun concept. Bed bound tickle torture is always fantastic and really love how you drew the mattress and blankets on the bed. With all the curves on the blanket and indents from Fluttershy laying atop of it you really made it look super dang soft! With Flutter shy her self looking cute as a button with some wonderful looking soles and really like how the tail came out hanging over the bed towards the floor like that. But the colored tickle spots idea is also super good as well! Certainly makes it seem like the poor girl is quite sensitive~
Also love the lil detail of having some of the paint actually on Pinkie Pies hand like that, and the specks of it on the floor and bed. A neat detail you could of easily gotten away with not doing so I very much appreciate that extra attention to detail!

So a seriously damn good start on this series and looking forward tot he next part! Keep up the great work!

I appreciate that, thank you.

Personally I have mixed thoughts on how this turned out; something about the linework is off-putting to me. But all the little details were fun to work on; I'm glad you noticed and like them!

There's going to be some tummy-tickling in the future (I think)... XD

This is great!

The Dash one is actually really, really nice. Your anatomy shines in that one, and the colors combine into a very satisfying mix. Unsurprisingly (to us) you're actually quite good at armpit tickling... But also, that bed is hilariously well detailed. You can even see the mattress protrusions.

Liking Dash's outfit in particular too, oh yeah. Your expression work on these pone muzzles is always a treat - dash&flut definitely run away with it here though, ponk comes off a bit flatfaced; then again, who cares, it's ponk, she's allowed to be off model. We typically used you for the bigger pones like Sombra and the Princesses, but you really are quite damn pone capable; even the more distant feet have a distinct shape thats pleasant to look at (which is an accomplishment considering what is going on in that picture).

And, okay, to be fair, the predicament in that pic is one of our favorites too, so there's that bit of bias, but rest assured, this is among your better colored works (like those recent bard and dragon massage pictures). The way you used background color to better split and identify the two pictures, that's definitely a successful experiment - we've not really seen you do that before, it was usually more of a collage or comic approach? Not to say this is better, but you can rest easy, this approach looks really nice, especially with the colors already present in the pic.

Wonder which scenes were chosen for the rest of the pones...

- ExTor (still writing in the royal we, it's a habit, I'll get over it)

Adorable. I can't wait for you to be open for commissions again!

Thank you. :) I don't know how long it will be, unfortunately.

I know the whole point of commissioning artists is to have your ideas come to life, but damn is it satisfying to finally see something I write for fun get visualized like this. To actually see what I type down have an actual visual picture representing scenes in it is amazing.

The Pinkie chapter was the first one I did, and I'm fairly certain it was first put on /mlp/ way back in the day. I'm just glad the scenes looks better than I probably wrote it.

Like this just sounds like me leaning into the lazy OC self-insert I have, but fuck me, that bed looks comfortable with how big and soft it looks. I think it's because how you did the blanker. Most bed pics have very tightly tucked sheets, so just having the blanket with lumps such makes it feel much more real. And of course, the great little detail of the extra paint drops against the frame, the floor, and Pinkie's hand. Such a small little addition tells the story that it wasn't easy to get the paint on.

Also I am totally using this picture as reference now whenever I write another chapter and I inevitably forget where I made Fluttershy the most ticklish.

Now onto Dash's. The posing is just great. Really sells the feeling of fingers digging into her armpits and Fluttershy just struggling to get herself off the ground.

Also it's another little detail, but it's great to see that Rainbow Dash is significantly more muscular than Fluttershy when you compare her calves to Fluttershy's. A lot of it's covered up so you can't make much of a comparison, but it's nice to see differing anthro body types.

And also just the outfits. Great fun looking dress on Pinkie with a cute midriff-exposing top for Fluttershy and good choice of workout clothes on Dash and Shy on the right.

And I'm probably/absolutely gonna make similar comments like this for the next part, so be ready for that.

I know this fanfic ! It's so good, and your art is incredible too ! <3

Thank you! :)