Love Is... Forged in gold and diamond.
Love is not something that everyone finds easy to show, or to find. But me... I... well, I love it. :3 To show that, this series of short, single-scene stories is all about the many aspects of love. :3
This particular chapter means a lot to me. I don't normally ask for feedback outright, but any thoughts the Love Is readers might have about this particular piece... it'd mean a lot to hear it. <3
This particular chapter means a lot to me. I don't normally ask for feedback outright, but any thoughts the Love Is readers might have about this particular piece... it'd mean a lot to hear it. <3
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Lonnie. Lonnie Burkley
'Burkey and Simm, International Jewellers'
you missed an L; if they're suppoed to be the same person.
and personally.. i'm not too sure fo the significance behind this. :S
But this was VERY adorable.
It made me flutter inside to know i might have someone feeling this way around me.
and if that ring really exists; i'd LOVE to see a picture.
'Burkey and Simm, International Jewellers'
you missed an L; if they're suppoed to be the same person.
and personally.. i'm not too sure fo the significance behind this. :S
But this was VERY adorable.
It made me flutter inside to know i might have someone feeling this way around me.
and if that ring really exists; i'd LOVE to see a picture.
Well, some of them are based off my past experiences in love. Others are my hopes for the future, or my experience of seeing others in love. They're all aspects that I believe are integral to what love is though, so in that respect I personally believe the meaning of each chapter to be true even if the events are fictitious. :)
Yay spelling errors! And the significance... well, this series is just supposed to be snapshot scenes of Martin and Emma's life. Whether it'll be covered in a story ever I don't know, but I always saw Lonnie becoming something of a close friend to the both of them in the future. When Martin realises who she is, that he was recieving advice from not just a sales assistant but a founding member of the company, it'll be a trip just to imagine the look on his face. ^^
That ring was an image I conjured up in my own head. I love sapphires. :D If it does exist though, I wanna have it! :D
That ring was an image I conjured up in my own head. I love sapphires. :D If it does exist though, I wanna have it! :D
Stunning, this one even more than all the others took my breath away. I could really feel the emotion in here, and I felt anxious for Martian as I read, hoping that he'd find the perfect ring, and that ring is perfect. This is probably my favorite of all the stories in this series now.
I can't wait to see how he proposes to her. I have no doubt in my mind that she'll say yes!
I can't wait to see how he proposes to her. I have no doubt in my mind that she'll say yes!
There's no sex, omg! hehe just joking, my friend! I love your non-mature writings as much, if not more than your mature ones. n_n
Saying that, this is a wonderful chapter! Very heartwarming, and your descriptions left very little to the imagination. I had no problems invisioning the whole thing in my head whilst reading. In fact, I think this chapter would sound really good in audio book format. ;)
Saying that, this is a wonderful chapter! Very heartwarming, and your descriptions left very little to the imagination. I had no problems invisioning the whole thing in my head whilst reading. In fact, I think this chapter would sound really good in audio book format. ;)
... Do you ever scroll back to things you wrote in the past and read them with a "dude, wtf???" kind of face? :p well, this kinda happened right now. Just why did I write that comment 3 years ago?
Anyways, great chapter nonetheless. Had a great time reading Lonnie's description again, she's one of those characters I really like without knowing the reason :)
Anyways, great chapter nonetheless. Had a great time reading Lonnie's description again, she's one of those characters I really like without knowing the reason :)
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