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This poem is what i feel like screaming at
Christofur398 and My friend Sam
The heart is torn in two
the halves battle to find love
But a broken heart is lost
lost in a sea of blood
A broken heart lies
which is a broken soul
You can’t live with a broken soul
It like trying to live without air
How two lovers can tear a heart apart?
Why did you come back? why are you here?
You and him have caused my heart to be torn
I feel like there a battle in my heart for love
I feel lost in a sea of despair and death
It feel like my soul has broken in two
I can’t love both of you
But I can’t hurt you two
I would kill myself before I hurt you anymore
I’m sick causing you so much pain by now
Why can you stay in the past I could live that
But you here in my live right now destroys me
I can’t handle your sweet word
I can’t handle his loving touch
I don’t know why but I loved you for so long
But he’s the one that was there for me not you
I can’t live with you but I still love you
This battle in my heart is killing me
I might as well become an empty shell
I’m so close to losing my soul for you
I can’t have both of you and I know that
I can’t one of you without hurt the other
I never want to hurt you again
after all this time its still true
Why can’t my love for you die
I just have to choose one of you
Christofur398 and My friend SamThe heart is torn in two
the halves battle to find love
But a broken heart is lost
lost in a sea of blood
A broken heart lies
which is a broken soul
You can’t live with a broken soul
It like trying to live without air
How two lovers can tear a heart apart?
Why did you come back? why are you here?
You and him have caused my heart to be torn
I feel like there a battle in my heart for love
I feel lost in a sea of despair and death
It feel like my soul has broken in two
I can’t love both of you
But I can’t hurt you two
I would kill myself before I hurt you anymore
I’m sick causing you so much pain by now
Why can you stay in the past I could live that
But you here in my live right now destroys me
I can’t handle your sweet word
I can’t handle his loving touch
I don’t know why but I loved you for so long
But he’s the one that was there for me not you
I can’t live with you but I still love you
This battle in my heart is killing me
I might as well become an empty shell
I’m so close to losing my soul for you
I can’t have both of you and I know that
I can’t one of you without hurt the other
I never want to hurt you again
after all this time its still true
Why can’t my love for you die
I just have to choose one of you
Category Poetry / All
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You conveyed a lot of thoughts. That's not easy to do. I like it ^_^ Want some advice? If you want readers to share your emotions, you have to engage their senses. They need to see, hear, touch, and smell the events (not just be told about them). Use imagery to help people experience your thoughts.
Again, great poem. :-D Keep it up.
Again, great poem. :-D Keep it up.
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