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[The Sub-setting]
Synopsis: You, at a protest, are abruptly subsized amidst the crowd and seek a way out of your dangerous situation.
This second-person vignette was originally written for Twitter (click here to see it in its original format) and was an interesting exercise in writing paragraphs to the 280-character limit. I may do more of these in the future.
Notice: I recommend reading the story blind to spoilers, but if required, content warnings may be found in the submission tags.
Please follow the download link above to the pdf.
Synopsis: You, at a protest, are abruptly subsized amidst the crowd and seek a way out of your dangerous situation.
This second-person vignette was originally written for Twitter (click here to see it in its original format) and was an interesting exercise in writing paragraphs to the 280-character limit. I may do more of these in the future.
Notice: I recommend reading the story blind to spoilers, but if required, content warnings may be found in the submission tags.
Please follow the download link above to the pdf.
Category Story / Macro / Micro
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 387 kB
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To be honest your little story " Less than Lethal" is a pretty good example of some of the careless mentalities of police enforcement tools.
"Pacify" without a second thought of lingering effects. I would hope in your fiction the police would have some sort of recovery method for detainment, though I cannot think they would be gentle with it. As is often the case these days.
"Pacify" without a second thought of lingering effects. I would hope in your fiction the police would have some sort of recovery method for detainment, though I cannot think they would be gentle with it. As is often the case these days.
Hey, Benni! Want to give a reply here after all this time. I'm glad the story resonated with you when you read it. Police brutality is an important topic for which I want to keep a focus of critique. In the setting, they do indeed make an effort to collect those they subsize, but as you say, it's harsh and ends badly with frightening frequency. There's a reason people are protesting, as we should be in reality.
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