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Your art looks amazing, love the colour work, though if you're looking for critique one thing sprung out to me: the guns and their placement.
Both characters seem to be using guns without aiming through their sights, though this could be explained through cybernetics. However, they also don't seem to use the weapons' shoulder stocks, which is harder to explain. The rightmost character's weapon also seems hard to make sense of: It looks like a bolt-action rifle, though the bolt is situated above the fire control group while firing, and is in line with neither the magazine (presumed just in front of the trigger) or the barrel. I'm no firearms design expert, but I'm having trouble imagining how operating the bolt would allow a round to travel from magazine to chamber.
Aside from that I love it, you've earned my watch!
Both characters seem to be using guns without aiming through their sights, though this could be explained through cybernetics. However, they also don't seem to use the weapons' shoulder stocks, which is harder to explain. The rightmost character's weapon also seems hard to make sense of: It looks like a bolt-action rifle, though the bolt is situated above the fire control group while firing, and is in line with neither the magazine (presumed just in front of the trigger) or the barrel. I'm no firearms design expert, but I'm having trouble imagining how operating the bolt would allow a round to travel from magazine to chamber.
Aside from that I love it, you've earned my watch!
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