Well written and fun little story. The only thing that made it seem a bit too "cartoony" was imagining a fox would be able to swallow another adult fox whole, but this really didn't change the gist of the tale. Thanks for sharing!

Why do you keep commenting? I know you don't like the cartoony aspects of my vore. You've posted that over and over. I'm not going to stop doing toony stuff just for you.

While the writing itself is always quite good, sometimes the vore aspects DO seem relatively plausible, which makes them even better. In this case there were no tags to inform the reader that this would be one of the more "cartoony" ones. A popular tag to denote this kind of thing is "same sized prey".

Don't pretend you only comment about size. You often comment about 'realistic species' as well and whatever digestive process you dislike. If things aren't hyper realistic, you send a passive aggressive note about how things 'could be perfect if you juuuuust change one thing'. And you do this to literally everyone. You give a little praise, but swear it could have been amazing if only they'd written it the 'right' way, which is of course your way.

Please stop commenting on my work or I'm going to block you.

That was a really fun read. Very nice.

That was a nice read~