It's steadily growing longer! I'm going to add more characters soon, just figured an update seemed appropriate.

Added some things and amended some misinterpretations.
Anyone who's in this: please let me know anything specific about your character (such as a shirt design you'd like me to use; if it's over-detailed I'll simplify it). If the pose description seems somewhat ambiguous in Bai's journal, let me know the finer details. :>
Once I increase the resolution on this, I might have to draw it in sections (SAI has a size limit in pixels, I dunno if it'll cross it or not). Once the lineart is done, I won't be making huge changes.

Also: sorry it's so sloppy! I'm trying to get in a lot quickly so I'm not fine-tuning the sketch very much.