I can't wait to read this!

I hope you like it!

An excellent story! I love when you write about fantasy because I can see the attention to detail when you refer to certain things like magic. Most people go "woosh now your gaining weight" but you make it the proper process of magical steps and even with clerical magic and sigils. Excellent work as always ♥️

Thanks very much. I spend far too much of my spare time trying to figure out how magic would work in a logical way.

I think it's very engaging and helps with the story overall. That and as a fellow D&D guy I heavily appreciate this

Longtime reader/lurker, just chiming in to offer my praise. Lovely as always, and even a little more wholesome than I was expecting.

Thanks so much!

I don't want to be too specific since I don't want to spoil anything for anyone who hasn't read the story yet, but I can't help but imagine the aftermath being a kobold uprising. I mean, if one kobold can do that...

Who knooooows?!

Wonderful imagery in that "cream puff" mirror scene. Great detail with all the pampering, especially once she can barely life her paws! 🍨

Thanks, I was proud of that scene. It does get a bit tricky to write weight gain scenes in more interesting ways.

I love this story, one of my favorites from you. Honestly not a HUGE fan of the ending, though it is a tad refreshing to see someone escape their fat fate every once and awhile.

Thanks very much. I like Raleigh too much to see her subject to such a fate. She's a hero, through and through.

I adored the story, your best yet, and I think the ending was thematically appropriate for the character and tone. Though I do have a few more specific thoughts, if you'd like to hear them.

Thanks very much! And I'm all ears

I rather liked this story, though Im not a big fan of immobility myself the way you crafted the story and world building was rather fascinating and then the way you built up the weight gain itself and how and why Alludra was fattening Raleigh and the interaction between the two was just pure decadence ^^

I wont go into details as to avoid spoilers but I also liked the climax and ending to the story. it was a fully fleshed out story, pun a little intended lol

Thanks so much!

Ooh this is a pretty fun one, you have some really delightful scenes and situations in here, you always handle not only the gains but the set up so well

That's really nice of you to say. I'm glad you liked it.

Was finally able to sit down and read this and I have to say that I ADORED IT!!
Expansion of any kind is wonderful but to have a fantastic story acting as it's true frame makes it so SO much sweeter! <3
Such wonderful work!

I'm glad you liked it, thanks!

Hey, I just finished reading this yesterday! I really liked the characters and how fleshed out the world seemed, like even one-off side characters had a good amount of personality and getting to see Raleigh's thoughts and memories of all the people she'd met along the way really made the world feel like, more lived in. Like the sergeant-at-arms from the start turned out to have a lot going on!

And I liked how, like almost right from the start when Alludra was talking to Raleigh, I had the distinct impression that all the questions she was asking were leading to something, like she was vetting her. And Ruby's development! Like, towards the end of Raleigh's conversion into a trophy it can be kinda hard to tell if what Raleigh is saying is really what she wants or if it's just what she's been made to feel. Like I could see how the kobolds would think like, they want to do what Alludra wants to begin with and obviously these people become much happier, so obviously we must be doing a good thing, but you can see how it's rife with confirmation bias, like obviously people going to be more pliable if they're being magicked to be that way! So at the end like, even after Ruby had tried to bury her doubts and dove into the feedings, she still gave Raleigh a chance to choose what she wanted for real and she was there to help once there wasn't any more room for doubt, I really liked that.

Also, I kinda had the feeling that Alludra would be the kind of person who's all sunshine and smiles so long as she's getting what she wants, so when the gloves came off during the escape it definitely felt like there were very high stakes. Like you don't know what she'll do if she catches them but it won't be anything good, even after everything she'd done to that point Ruby was still scared enough to consider turning Raleigh back in :c Raleigh getting her powers back and blasting her earlier was awesome though, even if it didn't end up doing much.

And Mr. Moon! I remember that guy, it's been a while since I read your stuff but I'm glad that he's still kicking and doing his thing. Of course, the implication is that if it wasn't for his intervention they almost definitely would have died, but Ruby did her best!

I'm not going to get into the kinky stuff too much but yeah like, women getting fattened and cared for by other, smaller but still rotund women, it's good content. It kinda seemed like Raleigh might be receptive to all this under different circumstances? Like clearly she's far too busy to sit around and eat right now and how no tolerance for being held against her will, I think she made that pretty clear. But she liked being touched and the frequency that she'd be blushing and whatnot seemed to imply that either she's just not used to seeing that much skin/fur on display or she has an underlying appreciation for this kinda thing. Like idk, maybe someday she'll get to retire and have nice things?

And the end when they woke up after escaping! I was curious about how they'd handle things once they got free what with being so huge and all, but I guess Raleigh slimming down is symbolic of fully escaping Alludra's influence. I was surprised that Ruby became comparatively small as well since the kobolds seemed fairly agile but it makes sense thematically. I was thinking maybe she'd take a minute to recover somewhere all of her friends and her boss wouldn't see her like that but it's good that she can pick up right where she left off. Maybe Mr. Moon had something to do with it? But yeah I'm happy that the two of them are going to get to go on adventures together! I'm wondering what their dynamic would be like, Raleigh doesn't seem like she'd want an underling regardless but would Ruby want a new master to follow? Or are they more like, equal partners?

There were some other little details I liked, such as Alludra apparently having to take that stimulant to avoid succumbing to her own nature, and Daphne coming back into play with that communique, and Raleigh and Ruby bogeying out of Arcbury at the mere mention of breakfast. But yeah this was really good! Thank you for sharing it with us!

Thanks so much for the comment and taking the time to write it. I appreciate it very much! I hope to have Raleigh in another story at some point but who knows? Mr. Moon may come back again soon as well.

Can I ask you some questions if that is okay with you?

Sure, send me a note if you like.

Stayed up til 1am to finish this story, absolutely loved it!

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks very much!

Personally I was rooting for Raleigh to give in and just become a trophy, but that's just because I love a happy ending <//<

Hey, that was really, really good! Definitely a bit of a marathon, but it's nice to add a bit of plot with your porn every now and then. Also I have to agree with you, Raleigh is just too precious to end up as a vacant, apathetic trophy.
Although, I do hope we get to see her partake in yet more fattening adventures one day, haha.

Thanks very much! I do have some ideas regarding Raleigh in the future.

Awww, well they're escaped, and they're free out of Alludra's claws, her army of Royal Kobolds and finally so Gnoll massager.

Raleigh's adventure is just begun, what she was experienced in Alludra's volcano.

hmm, the edit to the ending is ok, though I can definately see where things were cut and shifted. i think I prefer the original myself.

Where do I read it.?

Its an RTF file you can download. it'll work in most word programs.

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