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This was made for a prop in one of my student films this semester, I'll let you pick it out once I have the film up (acutally it'll be a trailer)
The trailer is of the F. Scott Fritzgerald book "Tales of the Jazz Age" and thus includes a lot of period 1920's scenes in it, luckily tonight some coworkers of my mom own a historical house filled with antiques of this time period. The scene this prop was in called for vintage champagne, something expensive and akin to Crystal I imagine, and instead of buying a bottle of champagne I've decided to do something I always wanted to do and make up my own product placement. You know, like "Red Apple" cigs and "Big Kahuna Burger" in Quentin films.
The trailer is of the F. Scott Fritzgerald book "Tales of the Jazz Age" and thus includes a lot of period 1920's scenes in it, luckily tonight some coworkers of my mom own a historical house filled with antiques of this time period. The scene this prop was in called for vintage champagne, something expensive and akin to Crystal I imagine, and instead of buying a bottle of champagne I've decided to do something I always wanted to do and make up my own product placement. You know, like "Red Apple" cigs and "Big Kahuna Burger" in Quentin films.
Category All / Miscellaneous
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 1129px
File Size 184.7 kB
Logo is hard to read, it utilizes the font correctly but the rest of the label is abused by it. Cut down on the calligraphic font and go with a more traditional serif font. The design is crowded, let it breathe, you have some good elements in there but it seems like you did not know what way to go with it. Watch your kerning between the words. Mainly between the T and the W, the a and the r the r and the t.
Keep going! You have a start.
Keep going! You have a start.
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