Get him nekkd Mr. Smoke!!!

Isn't that a bit too far?

Umm depends on your point of view

I assure you, I got a very wide point of view

I dont mean to step on toes hon, I was puttin a joke on up above, I promise nothing crude or upsetting is meant.

No offense taken at all, I just try to joking back but I guess I'm not good enough at joking in English ^^''

Oh no hon, im sorry lol, im just afraid of saying the wrong thing (with anyone) *hugs*

Yes, you're dead you stupid prowler. TEACH HIM a LESSON!

Sure thing

Hm, Grammar is a little off.

"What kind of a freak stores this aweful food in the fridge?" (I think that's what you were going for.)
"A freak you say? I think someone just needs a lesson in discipline."

I like how the story is progressing.

*awful

Darn you, FA! Where's the edit button?

lawl

Thank you for correction. I would love to have the comment edit button too :\

What a freak, storing all those awful foods in the fridge.

A freak you say? I think someone needs a lesson in discipline.

Lookin' great as usual Defago :D

Thanks for always give me a comment ^^

Any time ^_^

I'd say rrrape him but.... naaaaaaah, just toss him to the autorities after hurting him a bit, just a bit.....

I see someone had a naughty mind, I'll considering your opinion :P

haha just wanted to speack my mind lol

That face is awesome. XD Love it. ^ ^

You mean the Raccoon or Mr.Smoke?

Oops, forgot to be specific. XD
Mr. Smoke, his expression is just amazing in this page. ^ ^

Face = dead (maybe) intruder

D.E.A.D

I finely dressed Mr. Smoke + no pupils = undeniably AWEsome! :u

That's what I have to say about this page! ^^

Wait! Hear him out! Let him explain himself!

Awesome juice for a awesome lion

Sophisticated lion is sophisticated

AWESOME-JUICE.

Hah hah, this was great! I finally got around to check out some more stuff from your gallery, including your comic. I really enjoyed it! ( There were some problems with the English, as others mentioned, but I was able to understand everything fine. )

So your Mr. Smoke is actually some kind of professor/ teacher? I think I like him more already. _

Not sure what you have in mind for the story, but unlike most folks here, I actually hope this isn't going down the RAEP road, because it is too good for that. Reminds me of comics like Blacksad, really. But I'm sure I'll like whatever you come up with.

... Now post MOAR of Mr.Smoke. 83

Yeah, English isn't really my strong point as you can see, but I'll try to make it more correct in the future.
I shouldn't tell you about what will happen next! cuz it SPOILER X3
Thanks for loving my comic and especially Mr.Smoke. <3

Well, if it makes you feel any better, many native English speakers don't do much better. It seems most aren't even trying. :C

>Thanks for loving my comic and especially Mr.Smoke. <3

Yes, it's great so far and I'm looking forward to the next update. You make your old man so proud.

" I'm so dead , so very very dead" << make me remind kungfu panda xD

Really!? I didn't know that

The comic so far looks Great, and is quite interesting...
Even when is obvious that Mr. smoke is not going to eat the raccoon(:(), You cant teach a lesson to something you are going to eat/kill(:3c).

that "need" there in Smoke's statement needs an "s".

Damn. I love Mr.Smoke, above all how draw you him in your avatar:)

Thank you, you can see the big picture here (in case you haven't seen it yet) http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3750012/

Mark: 'Gasp!' He dropped a burger! O:
Robby: You really don't pay attention, do you?
Mark: Great job with the story so far! XD

Thanks, but who is Robby?

Mark: Oh he's my pet canine/wolf. I check art with him to get a second opinion. X3
Robby: Betcha think it's weird huh?

Everybody have the right to do what they love as long as it doesn't harm other people, my friend ^^
So, not at all, Robby.

Mark: Oh. Wow, thanks. I actually feel a lot better. :)
Robby: Heh. This is just my personality.

Ah.. the ability to show up with that type of timing to a burglary. Thus allowing you to do whatever you want to do to said burglar due to him invading your house. (It's not murder if he broke in. :p)

That and I like your facial expression there the most. It's like it's showing something like "You know you fucked up right?" And the presence in the last panel with all the speed lines just make it seem like there's about to be a murder commited right there. (With the suit, it also makes you look like a crime boss. JUST SAYING. :P) I almost feel sorry for the raccoon.

....almost.



Still Defago, I happen to enjoy this. I truly do. :)