nice story o.o

Very touching and well-executed... And a good reminder that sometimes, you may have too many preconceived notions about someone, before you meet and actually start to learn them for who they really are.

It's rare that someone possesses talent for both writing and visual depictions; I'd tip my hat to you, if I wore one.

This was a very good read - good job sir!

Seems our protagonist enjoyed himself far more then he expected.
His father is a very amusing person.

*A tear rolls down my cheeck.* It's a very touching story, I love it.

Very very good read :D I enjoyed it.

Very touching story, full of love and warm feelings.

You write such good stories and i always read them with joy. You have a way with words, that it is so pleseant to read and you got so vivid images in my mind of what it is described in your stories. Your knowledge of words is vast and i dare to say that if you are not a professional writter by now, you should try that. ^^

Also, with such a great skills at drawing, wow, it just compliments your works so good. It is a complete pleassure to see and read all of your creations ^^

Thanks a lot for sharing all of this with us ^^

Take care and keep up this magnificent work.

*Smiles and waves*

This story makes me really miss the good ol' times with Dad... I really, really miss those days a lot...

Beautiful. Such a warm and adorable visit. And believable too. ^^

Wow, i really enjoyed this tale and the picture...

.....*sighs*...It must be cool to have a father reaching out to you...=/

It flowed nicely. I would love to see a follow up.

nice work

Very nice story! Short and sweet, and a great prelude to the pic just ahead! :)

Pretty damned awesome man, you should write more.