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"As I listened to the song, I imagined Jaiko walking down a darkening road, with weeping willows thickly lining both sides. The ground is covered in snow and the wind is lightly blowing the trees - causing them to chit and chatter with one another.
As Jaiko's feet pad down the road little sparkles flutter in the air - occasionally twirling around his body, almost like there're mocking his sorrow. The sky is stained an odd hue of ginger and orange - sunset. As the song progresses the sky slowly blackens and the wind picks up. Jaiko flips up the collar of the coat he's wearing and cradles himself. He closes his eyes as they slowly begin to tear up, but just as it seems the weather is going to take a turn for the worst and the sky blackens further and small shine of light can be seen at the end of the road. Also the sky begin to lighten back up, now stars can be seen glimmering in the sky - like little diamonds upon black velvet. The light gently shines upon Jaiko's snout - one end of his mouth turns up. The light feels warm, it's his warmth and it's only for him. It's his happiness. An ideal location, situation, or true love."
After my most recent relationship ended (Just two days ago actually ._.) I decided to write a song about how I feel. Tell me what you think.
I decided to use the toy piano instrument as the first and last instrument you hear in this song. Sounds like a Kalimba but isn't (Typed to let Foxamour know) And being the first song I used an Oboe, I think I did it justice.
As Jaiko's feet pad down the road little sparkles flutter in the air - occasionally twirling around his body, almost like there're mocking his sorrow. The sky is stained an odd hue of ginger and orange - sunset. As the song progresses the sky slowly blackens and the wind picks up. Jaiko flips up the collar of the coat he's wearing and cradles himself. He closes his eyes as they slowly begin to tear up, but just as it seems the weather is going to take a turn for the worst and the sky blackens further and small shine of light can be seen at the end of the road. Also the sky begin to lighten back up, now stars can be seen glimmering in the sky - like little diamonds upon black velvet. The light gently shines upon Jaiko's snout - one end of his mouth turns up. The light feels warm, it's his warmth and it's only for him. It's his happiness. An ideal location, situation, or true love."
After my most recent relationship ended (Just two days ago actually ._.) I decided to write a song about how I feel. Tell me what you think.
I decided to use the toy piano instrument as the first and last instrument you hear in this song. Sounds like a Kalimba but isn't (Typed to let Foxamour know) And being the first song I used an Oboe, I think I did it justice.
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Music is always at it's best when it comes from the soul/heart and not from just sitting down and "trying" to write something. Very nice on the Kalimba (I think thats what it is.. the bell piano). The Oboe is nice as is the Panflute (Or blown bottle). Keep up the good work Jaiko. Ooooh! And the rhythm section just kicked in. This gets a fave! *hugz*
All I can do is offer my hopes that you can find love that does stay *Hugs and kisses*
I did love this piece. All of your music is great, and I still consider it the best furry music I've heard that uses drums, because a lot of it is from -YOU-. I can only imagine what will happen when vocals come into your production.
...Wait...is that what an Oboe is supposed to sound like? *The second instrument* o.o; ....Man, Libby and Kelly need to try harder! <.<;
And I faved this while listening to it, that's how much I liked it
I did love this piece. All of your music is great, and I still consider it the best furry music I've heard that uses drums, because a lot of it is from -YOU-. I can only imagine what will happen when vocals come into your production.
...Wait...is that what an Oboe is supposed to sound like? *The second instrument* o.o; ....Man, Libby and Kelly need to try harder! <.<;
And I faved this while listening to it, that's how much I liked it
Being alone is the worst thing that can happen... I just dont want to be alone forever and Im sure everyone would say the same. Jaiko your a very talented and loving dragon, and I love seeing that in you, and I hope everything works out for you hun.
This song is so moving, very soothing and yet sounds so good. Keep up the good work hun, you are a great musician, dont ever quit that -hugs you close and hands you a red rose- Hope you feel better -licks-
---Charmy/Kalia---
This song is so moving, very soothing and yet sounds so good. Keep up the good work hun, you are a great musician, dont ever quit that -hugs you close and hands you a red rose- Hope you feel better -licks-
---Charmy/Kalia---
So beautiful...cold and beautiful like crystal on a chandelier, clean and majestic as it hangs on the frosty air of an empty mansion...You feel its loneliness as the day passes into night, the largest and most beautiful the centerpiece, yet there it is alone with all others just out of reach, together...
AS the moon gazes into the hall, the largest crystal is the most fantastic as its long, removed dance sways ever so slightly...trembling as if it were crying diamonds and eventually stops everything, for it is no longer some glorious piece, its alone and fallen...a cloud in its past pedestal before dissolving...
Though it may be bad to feel alone when you're with a mate, its worse when you have no one....I only hope someone may come along to cuddle you against the cold and guard you from the pale...
Peace be upon your wracked heart and torn mind, kind Jaiko...Your moment will come and with it your mate for life and possibly more....
We're all here for you hun^^
~/*Saturn Thalarctos*\~
AS the moon gazes into the hall, the largest crystal is the most fantastic as its long, removed dance sways ever so slightly...trembling as if it were crying diamonds and eventually stops everything, for it is no longer some glorious piece, its alone and fallen...a cloud in its past pedestal before dissolving...
Though it may be bad to feel alone when you're with a mate, its worse when you have no one....I only hope someone may come along to cuddle you against the cold and guard you from the pale...
Peace be upon your wracked heart and torn mind, kind Jaiko...Your moment will come and with it your mate for life and possibly more....
We're all here for you hun^^
~/*Saturn Thalarctos*\~
Oh Jaiko, I'm so sorry to hear that. Not sure what else is there to say, other than what others have already said.
Hang in there, Jaiko, hang in there. I'm sure that special someone will be walkin' over that hill towards you with their arms open wide, loving and kind, eventually down the road. Don't close your eyes and get lost. Don't let yourself get tired and turn back down the street. Tell your feet "Come on - stay in there" and keep a trunkin', keep a walkin' down that road and find happiness. Even if that special someone takes awhile to get over the hill, don't despair - during that wait you have the care, love, and support of your friends. Not only the friends you see day to day, but even the friends you have over the internet. We’re here for you too. Don't forget about us. We'll stand by your side, my self included.
As of now, I know you'd wish this or wish that or don't understand this or that - but true love takes time. Takes time to find, that's the key, that and patients. I know I say this a lot and the day you broke up discourages you, but just the next day will hold another chance at happiness. Another chance to discover something worth wild, something for the better.
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As for the song - another beautiful piece, marvelous. Not going to lie, but it brought tears to my eyes. As I listened to the song I imagined Jaiko walking down a darkening road, with weeping willows thickly lining both sides. The ground is covered in snow and the wind is lightly blowing the trees - causing them to chit and chatter with one another.
As Jaiko's feet pad down the road little sparkles flutter in the air - occasionally twirling around his body, almost like there're mocking his sorrow. The sky is stained an odd hue of ginger and orange - sunset. As the song progresses the sky slowly blackens and the wind picks up. Jaiko flips up the collar of the coat he's wearing and cradles himself. He closes his eyes as they slowly begin to tear up, but just as it seems the weather is going to take a turn for the worst and the sky blackens further and small shine of light can be seen at the end of the road. Also the sky begin to lighten back up, now stars can be seen glimmering in the sky - like little diamonds upon black velvet. The light gently shines upon Jaiko's snout - one end of his mouth turns up. The light feels warm, it's his warmth and it's only for him. It's his happiness. An ideal location, situation, or true love.
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As I said Jaiko, simply hang in there - stay optimistic, don't fret about time. Take time, allow time to pass and let that happiness, and let that one true special person walk into your life. Hang in there - it'll come. My best wishes to you and your life.
Hang in there, Jaiko, hang in there. I'm sure that special someone will be walkin' over that hill towards you with their arms open wide, loving and kind, eventually down the road. Don't close your eyes and get lost. Don't let yourself get tired and turn back down the street. Tell your feet "Come on - stay in there" and keep a trunkin', keep a walkin' down that road and find happiness. Even if that special someone takes awhile to get over the hill, don't despair - during that wait you have the care, love, and support of your friends. Not only the friends you see day to day, but even the friends you have over the internet. We’re here for you too. Don't forget about us. We'll stand by your side, my self included.
As of now, I know you'd wish this or wish that or don't understand this or that - but true love takes time. Takes time to find, that's the key, that and patients. I know I say this a lot and the day you broke up discourages you, but just the next day will hold another chance at happiness. Another chance to discover something worth wild, something for the better.
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As for the song - another beautiful piece, marvelous. Not going to lie, but it brought tears to my eyes. As I listened to the song I imagined Jaiko walking down a darkening road, with weeping willows thickly lining both sides. The ground is covered in snow and the wind is lightly blowing the trees - causing them to chit and chatter with one another.
As Jaiko's feet pad down the road little sparkles flutter in the air - occasionally twirling around his body, almost like there're mocking his sorrow. The sky is stained an odd hue of ginger and orange - sunset. As the song progresses the sky slowly blackens and the wind picks up. Jaiko flips up the collar of the coat he's wearing and cradles himself. He closes his eyes as they slowly begin to tear up, but just as it seems the weather is going to take a turn for the worst and the sky blackens further and small shine of light can be seen at the end of the road. Also the sky begin to lighten back up, now stars can be seen glimmering in the sky - like little diamonds upon black velvet. The light gently shines upon Jaiko's snout - one end of his mouth turns up. The light feels warm, it's his warmth and it's only for him. It's his happiness. An ideal location, situation, or true love.
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As I said Jaiko, simply hang in there - stay optimistic, don't fret about time. Take time, allow time to pass and let that happiness, and let that one true special person walk into your life. Hang in there - it'll come. My best wishes to you and your life.
You've got quite a talent for music (though the image is lost on me as I don't get much from music, but anyway...). Faving and saving.
Hopefully things can get better for you. Although with all the friends and support you have it's just a matter of time until things do get better. Best of good luck.
Hopefully things can get better for you. Although with all the friends and support you have it's just a matter of time until things do get better. Best of good luck.
Mrrf...Once again, a track that really conveys the emotion you felt. 'Tis a shame that things turned out that way...You should consider submitting your written works to FA also. You seem like you're pretty good at it ^^
Also, I like this because it sounds like an emotional piece from a video game...it's quite clear that you want to do game soundtracks :3
Also, I like this because it sounds like an emotional piece from a video game...it's quite clear that you want to do game soundtracks :3
Michigan...i think down by Detroit not sure it was several years ago.i sooo wanted to go and study forestry.wanted to be a park ranger.but they found out i once attempted suicide, and that was the end of that dream.i kept calling them asking to be let in even underwent an expensive*well expensive for us anyway*psychiatric evaluation to proove that i was no longer suicidal but they never returned my calls.
The bit at around 1:00 was definitely fantastic. Brought in some really nice elements. the strings sound great throughout the whole song. I definitely like the drums introduced at 2:35. In fact, I think the trippy mid-song drum influx is a cool trademark of yours. Seriously good work.
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