Well, the mic doesn't seem to hate you this much today, it actually caught your voice very good.
The piano line was very good, smooth simple and clean, your voice fits in the perfects.
The second voice line, though not cleary understandable/recognizable underlines the main voice fittingly.
Background and foreground audio play together very well. and all in all, it's great work again.

Keep doing. Keep going. Don't let down.

Well that was fast, thank you Lupo ^^

and though it did hear the full piece XD

wow... just... wow u.u be-au-ti-ful and so sad... *wipes tears away*

*hugs* Thank you honey :)

Wow!

Uhm.. thanks! x/3

I am still utterly amazed by your voice.

You must sing more.

*nods and smiles* I will do, promised =)
I still hope to get the opportunity to do a lyriced Charactertheme ^^

What exactly is that? I'm intrigued.

*smiels* Well basically you can get a Charactertheme nearly everywhere where you can find a musician.
But i offer a charactertheme with selfwritten lyrics that are sang.. well.. you get a whole song with voice and all, fitting to your character =)

Thought i could try that idea 'cause it's new ^^

Oh geez....

If only my finances were better...

FAV! ¦o)

*mrurrsel* haww danke dir x3

*durchkushcL* Ein tolles Stück Musik!

mraurrr *re* x3
sag mal hab ich dich eigentlich in nem Messanger? *direkt schnapp* x3

Your voice is incredible, as is your performance on the piano - I don't listen to nearly enough music from other users here, but since I last heard from you you've really got into professional territory! And you say that this was done in one day?

I really love the choir sound in the section around 3:30.

Wow wow o.o
Iam far away from professional *g*
If you have any tips for me just tell me *wags*

And iam sooo glad to hear such a thing from you x3

I'd say i'm pretty much with davidn on that one. I'd even go as far as to say you are better than some of the pros that i've heard. I mean even 'Flight Of The Dragon' could put Final Fantasy composer Nobuo Uematsu to shame, and this song, I could just hear this on the radio right now. Amazing voice, amazing music :-D All I can say is, hurry up and make some more

*sits there with maw wide open*
i.. w...h..i..
i.. woah.. thank you..
It's unbelievable to me that flight of the dragon could be that good.. i mean.. foxamoore is the instrumental-pro here on FA not me iam just a little light.. but that got me more confident.. ill do more.. thank you..

wow beautiful song :D

schön wieder was von dir zu hören^^

Ich danke vielmals *sacht wedel*
und es freut mich dass dir der Song gefällt =)

sehr sogar :D

I feel the this song all the way down to my very core. I was in that exact place about a month ago, watching this song go down first person. Wasn't fun.

Anyway, enough emo ranting from me.

This song is absolutely beautiful, in every sense of the word! The piano melody is very pretty, the vocals sound absolutely wonderful, and the harmonies were spot on, and the lyrics were very heartfelt and well-written.

My only question is...Are you using a pop filter when recording vocals? There's a spot or two with a little bit of air distortion, and if you're not using a pop filter, that would really help =D. But really, it's only once or twice in the whole song where it happens.

Wonderful job. This goes in my favorites, and you go in my watch list.

*smiles and wags*
Yeah iam using a pop-filter :).. well it's pretty improvisational xD
It's a grid with a pentyhose put over it xD

haw.. iam sorry to hear that *offers a hug*..

Thanks for getting on your watchlist.. naa i dunno what to say first and and *passes out*

*chuckles*

You can order a pop filter online for about 20 bucks =D. That's about how much I paid for mine ^^.

Touching indeed, felt that song in a couple different ways. Nice job hunny ^.=.^

*smiles* Thank you.. that means a lot coming from you *Wags*

Im not really the best critic you know so dont think to much of my opinion lol

Etwas traurig... aber nicht weniger schön.
Echt super gemacht shady <3 deine stimme ist wunderschön..
*wünschte er hätte auch so eine stimme* ._.

*schmunzel* traurige Lieder mach ich iwie gerne ^^'

Danke dir süßer *umarm* x3

Erinnert mich irgendwie ein bisschen an damals. *mit Zaunpfahl wink* und so.
Der Text ist schoen, vielleicht etwas simpel aber das ist ok. Pop darf simpel sein und wirkt trotzdem - vor allem das Klavierspiel gefaellt mir sehr gut.

For the english readers:

Reminds me of the old days, somehow *gives a broad hint* and so...
The lyrics are beautiful, maybe a little simple bur thats ok. Popmusic can be simple and still work out fine - most of all I really like the piano.

*lach*
der darf simpel sein, wie du schon sagst ^^
Na ich danke dir für den lieben Comment ^^

great idea , and way to earn money! =3

*laughes*
yeah.. iam still hoping i dont charge to much xD

i think this is right! =3 ur making it for them and even starting frm scrap so! *nods*

Man Du mußt endlich mal was draus machen , deine stimme ist schon der hammer bevor irgendwas im Tonstudio gemacht wurde .
Das bekommt ein +++fav :3 werde es mir auch noch runterladen und morgen während der Autofahrt anhören .

ui *rot werd*
Uhm.. danke vielmals :3

Spread my music thorugh the world! xD

good work shady
well done
i love your voice

thaaaanks x3

Lovely voice I know so well :)
Very good and emotional(!). Maybe some postprocessing possible but great work :)
And yes, sure I need to add to my prewriters: Great great voice, keep singing! ^^
*leonine hugs*
MafunDi

*smiles and hugs* haww...iam so glad you wrote this *blushes*..
i thought you would be.. angry and and.. awr.. *lowers his ears*
Thank you Mafu..

Definitely faving this one!

It's hard to listen to a piece that reminds you so much of an old love. But still good be able enjoy those emotions that come with it. Thank you for such a touching song.

i rather thank you for your words hun..

beautifull
it so remind me of my ex-girl
do mis her, but can't forgive =/

times change and old vanishes for new to come :)
head upö pal ;)

Good piece of melancholy. It's a bit long, but there are some nice harmonies.
You have some nice lyrics. Do you write in German and then translate or do you start right in English?

*laughes* I start right in English :)
Why.. is my english that bad? xD

no it's very good. That's why I was curious :3

*smiels thanks for the kind comment there
And yeah.. i could do a karaoke-version of that ^^

how about we discuss that in a messenger ^^?

That was beautiful.

Though it'd be much easier to reply in German, I'll try to stick to English once more.

First of all I realised that sad parts do fit your voice very well - or viceversa. That does not mean that you cannot or shall not sing happy songs as well, it's just as if it was easier for your voice to carry your heart into those lines you're singing, when it is a sad piece.

I like how easily you make up another song, how you play and sing it as if you've worked on it for weeks and months and now you said it was done in a day. Amazing, that is. And it shows me well, that I'm by no means a singer. Because I know how many weeks we had to work on songs in our choir and that I've never learned all those tiny things in varying the way you sing - like you did in the third stanza. And I have to agree, compared to what I've heard in years, you're on your way to become a professional musician with the talent only a few do have.

I'm so sorry that I won't be able to afford a personal theme soon and that is why I cancelled everything. But ... one day...! ;)

And on the last note - yes. Breaking up is hard to do. I have been there too often. I wish I could have stayed away from love for all my life. Touching song. Well performed.

well i was going to say its beautiful but i guess i got beat to that well good job and well im coyoteeros how are u

*smiles* Well iam fine.. you8 are.. coyoteeros? o.o

yes i am im using a friends account with his permission and the coyote smiles back

ahh *Wags*
that excplains a lot =)

well u seem cool so if u dont mind would u like to be fur friends

*laughes* why not ^^

This is not just a story that I know. It is one that I have lived.

When I last left these shores I told someone very dear something that... perhaps I shouldn't have. I told her that this was my job, that this was who I was. I could not change that. If she really couldn't love a sailor, then she'd best do herself a favor and forget about me. We'd never make it work.

I returned to find that she had taken me at my word. She found someone new, and they were happy together. She got what she needed, someone would always be there. It seems that I neglected to protect myself from the consequences of my decision. I chose career, success, duty; things I thought would make me happy, over someone that I knew would. I leave again this month, this time for the rest of the year. This time... I leave no one behind. It is both a comfort and a subtle twist of the knife that I still sometimes feel there...

Amazing! Thank you very much for your music!

I know, its a little bit older, 4 years ago you've written this, but i swear, I'm sitting here with tears in my eyes. Not only thats a very nice melody and that you have a beautiful voice, but the songtext nearly ripped my soul into half.

thanks, just thanks for this song...