Hey there! This is the 3rd and final bit of Chapter 1.

As with parts 1 and 2, this isn't 'finished' completely yet...I've worked a bit on all 3 parts lately, making things sound better, making things work better.

So, once it's all 'finished', I'll re-upload them all. I'll also put a note in each one, when they were last updated.

So, have a read and lemme know what you think.

Thanks.

(Last updated : 5th May 2010. Put in scraps as full chapter is now uploaded)