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Elysium Chapter One: The Arrival

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the first chapter of the novel i'm going to write "Elysium" i honestly want people's opinions on this so please gimme some feedback

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Helix Teller of Tales ~helixthefallen

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15 years ago

Well, hard to critique due to shortness. However you opened well in getting your audiences attention. Your descriptions are also strong. Best of luck with the rest.

Blood-Primarch ~blood-primarch

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15 years ago

thankyou I didn't want to post it all at once because I wanted to build Anticipation for the next chapters but Chapter Two: The Guest of Honour is near completion ^^

Aerowyld ~ps111dude

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15 years ago

Tis a a VERY interesting story so far.

Great chapter!

Blood-Primarch ~blood-primarch

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15 years ago

Awww thankyou ^^

Aerowyld ~ps111dude

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15 years ago

you're welcome^^

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