This is a work in progress. Because it involves some one close to me and others, it may never be seen completed except for there eyes by permission. YES, as said its a work in progress. The first draft was 5 min and second was another 15. I know it needs work! please comment your like or dislikes accordingly. Please respect that this is rough. Yes i know it breaks, probably 50 laws of collage English break downs of why it is or is not poetry. As for the later, screw off i don't care. It is a so story, its a heart, its something to be read, held and cherished by all.