A great animation from the dnd sessions jyinxx dose a great job acting with an accent.

i tried to sound evil... im not good at it

well you did well in my book.

If you consider that speech 'not good' at being evil, I am honestly slightly consider what you consider as being 'good' evil.
I mean, 2.0 was pretty vicious

That was really good. ^^

As I said on youtube I quite enjoyed this. You did a good job at making Merah 2.0 the cold calculating type of evil that sounds sweet, but has another more sinister layer to her words. That's the more dangerous type of evil in my opinion because they tend to be manipulative and get other people to serve their whims without getting their own hands dirty. At least that's how she came across in the short.

All in all nicely done with the evil monologue. She doesn't come across as forceful evil, but there's still evil in her words/actions.