This is a very interesting design. I like the colours in this.

About the only things I could suggest would be to define his ribcage a bit more, and to maybe work on making the linework flow a bit more smoothly. What sort of pen/markers do you use for inking?

I use an Artline 0.1 sized inking pen/marker for inking :3

Are they felt-tip or biro?

Either way, drawing from the shoulder will help eliminate the line wibble that you get when you draw with your fingers or your wrist. An easy way to train yourself to draw with your shoulder is to wear a wrist brace, to keep your wrist straight, when you draw. Because you have the extra weight of your arm to balance the pen, it forces you to go a bit more slowly, and smooths everything out.

ah okies, thanks for the advice ^-^

No problem. :)

i LOVE him! <333 *huggles* this is even better than when I tried to imagine him! you did so awesome!!! eeeee...!! <333

I'm sorry I've been away for so long. I must make my end of the deal as epic as this! >D <3

heehee I'm so glad you like him :] It's no problem, I've gotta was meant to make 2 more lanky things on thursday and I still haven't done em cause I've been away so it's cool :] Can't wait to see what you do! 8)