Not taken from a specific scene as such, but two bit-part characters from my novel The Cold Wind II: Taniwha (link on my profile page). At some point when I go back and rewrite the story to fix up the mistakes and general crapness of that story, I will expand much more on the relationship between these two.
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Young Vanguard engineer Blocker developed something of a mutual crush on the human Xenobiologist Dr. Ling who was ostensibly supposed to be studying him. Only it seems she wasn't the only one interested in a bit of biological experimentation *waggles eyebrows, Vanguard style*
Thank you so much Mr. Ives, absolutely stoked with this wonderful piece!
Last comment: *SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!*
ives Art!!!
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Young Vanguard engineer Blocker developed something of a mutual crush on the human Xenobiologist Dr. Ling who was ostensibly supposed to be studying him. Only it seems she wasn't the only one interested in a bit of biological experimentation *waggles eyebrows, Vanguard style*
Thank you so much Mr. Ives, absolutely stoked with this wonderful piece!
Last comment: *SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!*
ives Art!!!
Category Artwork (Digital) / Muscle
Species Reptilian (Other)
Size 900 x 808px
File Size 411 kB
ives has that effect on me, also I'm just such a ridiculous fanboy...As for the story, c'mon you've gotta admit it was kinda rough and with so many bits & pieces of storyline/characters hanging off it it resembled something hairy I mean, it is readable and all, just in dire need of polishing.
-) Indeed, I did see SOME loose ends; but I read it all in one day and was engrossed so it may be why I did not see it so much as you did. Which is fine; I do the same thing to the smut stories I've written; I think it's just the writers biological necessity to perfect it; even the smallest fracture needs addressing.
Which is part of the reason why work on the third novel in the series is progressing so slowly. I keep going back over and over previous pages in order to polish them or redo sentences/paragraphs etc that I am not making much in the way of head-way on it.
Grr, I should let go and just write the feckin' thing THEN go back and tidy it up. Never mind. Still cannot believe you polished Taniwha off in one day though, I didn't think it was THAT short But just thankful that you enjoyed it.
Grr, I should let go and just write the feckin' thing THEN go back and tidy it up. Never mind. Still cannot believe you polished Taniwha off in one day though, I didn't think it was THAT short But just thankful that you enjoyed it.
-) Omg, it was not short let me tell you. But I have a lot of time on my hands, and I am an exceptional reader when something keeps me so frekin interested. :D
-) When it comes to writing, I always have this nasty having of deleting seven paragraphs, then going back and replacing them over and over. It takes me a day to write a chapter with how obsessive I become over something. I know your pain, all to well. XD
-) When it comes to writing, I always have this nasty having of deleting seven paragraphs, then going back and replacing them over and over. It takes me a day to write a chapter with how obsessive I become over something. I know your pain, all to well. XD
-) Well, most of what I have written is smut sad to say; since its about the only thing that will be read on FA.
-) I am currently writing a new piece based of a macabre dream I had. Much like pine in the eeriness factor; I will link you to it when I am finished. :D
-) And my gallery does contain some poetry; feel free to look at it.
-) I am currently writing a new piece based of a macabre dream I had. Much like pine in the eeriness factor; I will link you to it when I am finished. :D
-) And my gallery does contain some poetry; feel free to look at it.
Don't downplay your writing just because it is smut. Good erotic fiction can often be more difficult to write than something G-rated. Easy enough to write pr0n, more difficult to write good pr0n. And yes, please do link me to any of your new work when you put it online, would love to have a look.
H2SO4, OM NOM NOM...? An engineer would definitely be the right caste to be in such an environment... a medic would likely be sampling the lab assistants and a warrior would probably just stab you in the face for being so Ancestor cursed boring
And just think of the efficiency he could get out of your centrifuge...
And just think of the efficiency he could get out of your centrifuge...
"Do you, by chance, have any quarters in that spandex of yours, big guy?"
"Quarters? No. Why?"
"Because you need to call your mother and tell her you ain't coming home, tonight." ;P
Your squeal is highly appropriate, my friend. xD I love how we've got both alien and human facial features that are so expressive here.
Also, I imagine that finger is diddling around in that beaker to give her a good idea of what she's in for.
"Quarters? No. Why?"
"Because you need to call your mother and tell her you ain't coming home, tonight." ;P
Your squeal is highly appropriate, my friend. xD I love how we've got both alien and human facial features that are so expressive here.
Also, I imagine that finger is diddling around in that beaker to give her a good idea of what she's in for.
There is so much innuendo and suggestive body language in this to make it QUITE obvious what Blocker, at least, has in mind Ives excels with pictures like this, placing a lot of emotion and humanity into the characters he draws.
If I wasn't single I would definitely have to try that pickup line on someone.
If I wasn't single I would definitely have to try that pickup line on someone.
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