looking nice .. but i would have to agree with you on the tent .... needs a bit work ..

I would agree there. It needs WORK. But what work it needs is sort of lost on me. I have no clue what to do with it to make it "work" in the picture. I'm thinking on turning it some to give it a different angle, or changing the perspective to show everything a little more nicely, but I'm just not computing on what would be best.

dunno .. i think the angle is actually really good ... but the tent looks like it's a weird wolen frame ..

http://i43.tinypic.com/20swy2f.jpg

here is what i think of tents (it's not good ... but just to give you an idea) .... #1 ... regular old tent .. and see how the sides lean inside ... the second is probably not what you're aming for... the new kind of tents, that the sides are pushed outwards ..... and your style the #3 somewhere in between .... not quite looking like a tent ...

ok it's not much, but it's all i can come up with and i hope it helps a bit ....... arfff

The scene is on the moon, so the fact that this is a 'tent' at all is just a loose definition anyways :)

1/6 gravity plus the tent is pressurized, but this is far enough in the future that the pressure may not even make the sides of the tent bow.

I love you bunny sketch, for the record... and the raccoon is pretty good (waiting for fluffy parts)

I feel like the scaling of the two characters is wrong, raccoon is too big or bunny is too small... but it's pretty close... like ms raccoon needs to be 80% of her current size or something... thoughts?

As for your thought to rotate it... try taking the side closest to us (camera) and swinging it to the left, out of the picture a little... have us be seeing the raccoon through the side that is currently on the right, and the raccoon be looking at the bunny through the side that she's currently looking out maybe?

If you want to try it... bunny should probably be walking on her toes... strong legs and no gravity.... I'd be walking on my toes :)

Actually, is this the feedback you're looking for?

man... the good parts I skipped over... I like the shape of the 'tent'... I like the lowered horizon, and the layout is correct.

That bunny sketch is fun looking, did you spend a while on that?

I dun' like tents in general, but the shape of it is fine; and aside from the lines running through the character, its not half bad. :)