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Watch the Skies= Prologue

By Jyinxx,
posted 15 years ago Anime Artist | Support me with Shinies!

well let me no what you all think ^w^
im not very good at writeing but i enjoy it

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sillyjackal ~sillyjackal

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15 years ago

I think its great. Few grammar problems, but that's neither here nor there. Well done.

Cant wait to read the whole thing ^_^

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Jyinxx ~xizana

Anime Artist

15 years ago

yeah i have issues with grammer XD

sillyjackal ~sillyjackal

Watcher

15 years ago

Its alright, you did a great job nonetheless. If you need someone to proofread it for you, i would be more than happy to do it.

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Jyinxx ~xizana

Anime Artist

15 years ago

^w^ ok

sillyjackal ~sillyjackal

Watcher

15 years ago

Just hope i can help ^_^

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LordLinam ~lordlinam

Photographer

15 years ago

why change it...i like how it looks....change is for car oil and poopy diapers! :3

leviadragon99 ~leviadragon99

Watcher

15 years ago

Hmm, rather ominous foreshadowing...

kuroryushin-kuma ~kuroryushin-kuma

Digital Artist

15 years ago

Wow i was hanging on every word! That was amazing i can't wait for the full thing *hands you a cookie* good job! ^.^.^

Momo_Hagurashi ~momohagurashi

Writer

15 years ago

wow thats awesome o.o

Azrahan ~azrahan

Watcher

15 years ago

Awesome job Xizzy. You've got a start to a great story going it looks like, and to heck with grammar probs. Call this a first draft if ya don't like the number of problems present, then go back and rework it after you've got the 'meat and bones' of it so to speak. Besides, you never know, those goofs might not be goofs, just... something different.

GrandDragoon ~granddragoon

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15 years ago

I love the prologue. It was intense.

Lexi_Shiger ~lexishiger

Anime Artist

15 years ago

Wow, so far i think its really good!! Especially describing the darkness and he 2 lights! great start! and as for grammar problems I did not see them! cant wait to read some more!