Sorry for the delay, here is my main OC and the main character of my WIP story, Jarrett.
Also i apologize for the wall of text, Critiques are welcome though, helpful ones only please!
Name: Jarrett Makenna
Nickname (s): Red
Species: Arctic Wolf
Age: 29
Personality: Fiery, Loyal, Vindictive, Honest, Confident, Occasional Grump
Birthday: April 18
Height: 6'3
Body Type: Lean and Muscular
Sexuality: Bi Curious with a female preference
Occupation: Wanderer
Skills: Pyromancy, Self Taught Martial Artist (Uses his own self taught style that has elements of Shaolin and other martial arts that embody the fire element, Fast, even on ice, decently strong, uses mainly melee weapons (Prefers Staffs, swords and greatswords, but will use any he can) immune to blade and bullets, as they pass through his body, his pyromancy protecting him.
Likes: Warm/Hot/Cold Weather, Dogs, Exploring new places, Video Games, people who think for themselves.
Dislikes: Rain. Betrayal, Ignorance, Arachnophobia, Claustrophobic
History: Jarrett was born to Aiden and Alena Makenna, the joint mayors of the town, in the small town of Snowspring, which was in the Syrlem Tundra, a town known for its large hotsprings. His mother was a kind, caring and warm person, who loved her son dearly, even after his powers manifested. His father, Aiden, on the other hand, abhorred magic in every way shape and form, seeing it as a way for people to not work. He is also known for being quite the bastard, often bending rules so he could do anything he wants, and prevents others from doing the same, though his wife tried to stop him, it was his way or a early trip to the grave.
Jarrett grew up mostly around his mother, who cared for him greatly and made sure he got the proper education he needed, He often used his magic to do tricks for the small group of friends that he had, which they loved as Jarrett could turn his flames different colors at will, all except Black.He also took self defense classes growing up and eventually found a way to incorporate his elemental magic into his fighting style, creating a brand new one all his own, since he had to grow up quick around his father. But whenever he did his fire tricks for his friends, and when his father managed to catch it, either in person, or by someone snitching, he would beat Jarrett mercilessly most times until he blacked out, his mother tried to defend him when this happened, but she too was beaten. She tried to leave him and take Jarrett over the years, but it was no good, Aiden had full control of the town court so Divorce was out of the answer. She tried fleeing the town, but he would always drag them back and beat them again.
Finally, one time, after drinking with some corrupt friends and Jarrett's 16th Birthday, it was too much and after a particularly nasty beating, his mother fell unconscious and into a deep Coma. Jarrett, outraged at this, wreathed his fist in a intense blue flame and slugged his father, permanently disfiguring him. Aiden though, in response, carved the X shaped scar into his son's cheek sadistically, expecting him to cry out in pain, but he only glared at his father, not making a sound and cauterized the wound, then springing up and grabs his father by the throat, just as his friends came in to see Aiden being engulfed in blue flames, burning him alive and reducing his father to ash.
Of course, he was arrested for murder, he knew that would happen, but what he didn't expect is that he was charged for his mother's abuse and, to his shock, everyone in the town believed the court, all his friends that he thought he knew, all the people he thought he could trust, gone in a instant.At the end of the "Trial" they deemed him "Too good for Death" and sentenced him to the Endless Dark, a deep, single cell under the city, surrounded by frigid water, and had no direct sunlight. The cell itself was like a steel coffin with see through waterproof and pressure proof glass windows to see the person inside via camera. Jarrett kicked and screamed the whole way. The cold sapped his strength immediately, as it was NOT insulated, rendering him into a sort of hibernation, where he would remain for 2 years, having only his thoughts for company.
He broke out a week after his 18th birthday, and time did NOT heal his wounds, he woke up enraged and burst out flying to the surface as the corrupt cops tried to shoot him, but he would vaporize them, no longer having any ties to his home town. He did however, go to their clinic, which was their hospital, but couldn't find his mother. He searched frantically until he came to the Graveyard, where he found his mother's grave. Outraged, he let his anger take over and burned his hometown to the ground, but spared the people, but killed their entire council since they took everything from him. He then found out they had killed his mother when she came too a year after he was imprisoned and blamed it on him too. He simply went home, took packed his things, taking a single picture of his mother and himself, and burned his old home to the ground before leaving to go south. He now wanders from place to place, mainly keeping to himself in his travels, but has made some friends, but is understandably wary, but until they decide to backstab him, he will take a bullet, so to speak, for each one.
Art © Pumpkinsugar over at dA
Jarrett Makenna ©
nova22
Also i apologize for the wall of text, Critiques are welcome though, helpful ones only please!
Name: Jarrett Makenna
Nickname (s): Red
Species: Arctic Wolf
Age: 29
Personality: Fiery, Loyal, Vindictive, Honest, Confident, Occasional Grump
Birthday: April 18
Height: 6'3
Body Type: Lean and Muscular
Sexuality: Bi Curious with a female preference
Occupation: Wanderer
Skills: Pyromancy, Self Taught Martial Artist (Uses his own self taught style that has elements of Shaolin and other martial arts that embody the fire element, Fast, even on ice, decently strong, uses mainly melee weapons (Prefers Staffs, swords and greatswords, but will use any he can) immune to blade and bullets, as they pass through his body, his pyromancy protecting him.
Likes: Warm/Hot/Cold Weather, Dogs, Exploring new places, Video Games, people who think for themselves.
Dislikes: Rain. Betrayal, Ignorance, Arachnophobia, Claustrophobic
History: Jarrett was born to Aiden and Alena Makenna, the joint mayors of the town, in the small town of Snowspring, which was in the Syrlem Tundra, a town known for its large hotsprings. His mother was a kind, caring and warm person, who loved her son dearly, even after his powers manifested. His father, Aiden, on the other hand, abhorred magic in every way shape and form, seeing it as a way for people to not work. He is also known for being quite the bastard, often bending rules so he could do anything he wants, and prevents others from doing the same, though his wife tried to stop him, it was his way or a early trip to the grave.
Jarrett grew up mostly around his mother, who cared for him greatly and made sure he got the proper education he needed, He often used his magic to do tricks for the small group of friends that he had, which they loved as Jarrett could turn his flames different colors at will, all except Black.He also took self defense classes growing up and eventually found a way to incorporate his elemental magic into his fighting style, creating a brand new one all his own, since he had to grow up quick around his father. But whenever he did his fire tricks for his friends, and when his father managed to catch it, either in person, or by someone snitching, he would beat Jarrett mercilessly most times until he blacked out, his mother tried to defend him when this happened, but she too was beaten. She tried to leave him and take Jarrett over the years, but it was no good, Aiden had full control of the town court so Divorce was out of the answer. She tried fleeing the town, but he would always drag them back and beat them again.
Finally, one time, after drinking with some corrupt friends and Jarrett's 16th Birthday, it was too much and after a particularly nasty beating, his mother fell unconscious and into a deep Coma. Jarrett, outraged at this, wreathed his fist in a intense blue flame and slugged his father, permanently disfiguring him. Aiden though, in response, carved the X shaped scar into his son's cheek sadistically, expecting him to cry out in pain, but he only glared at his father, not making a sound and cauterized the wound, then springing up and grabs his father by the throat, just as his friends came in to see Aiden being engulfed in blue flames, burning him alive and reducing his father to ash.
Of course, he was arrested for murder, he knew that would happen, but what he didn't expect is that he was charged for his mother's abuse and, to his shock, everyone in the town believed the court, all his friends that he thought he knew, all the people he thought he could trust, gone in a instant.At the end of the "Trial" they deemed him "Too good for Death" and sentenced him to the Endless Dark, a deep, single cell under the city, surrounded by frigid water, and had no direct sunlight. The cell itself was like a steel coffin with see through waterproof and pressure proof glass windows to see the person inside via camera. Jarrett kicked and screamed the whole way. The cold sapped his strength immediately, as it was NOT insulated, rendering him into a sort of hibernation, where he would remain for 2 years, having only his thoughts for company.
He broke out a week after his 18th birthday, and time did NOT heal his wounds, he woke up enraged and burst out flying to the surface as the corrupt cops tried to shoot him, but he would vaporize them, no longer having any ties to his home town. He did however, go to their clinic, which was their hospital, but couldn't find his mother. He searched frantically until he came to the Graveyard, where he found his mother's grave. Outraged, he let his anger take over and burned his hometown to the ground, but spared the people, but killed their entire council since they took everything from him. He then found out they had killed his mother when she came too a year after he was imprisoned and blamed it on him too. He simply went home, took packed his things, taking a single picture of his mother and himself, and burned his old home to the ground before leaving to go south. He now wanders from place to place, mainly keeping to himself in his travels, but has made some friends, but is understandably wary, but until they decide to backstab him, he will take a bullet, so to speak, for each one.
Art © Pumpkinsugar over at dA
Jarrett Makenna ©
nova22
Category All / All
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