this is a story I done for an artist I know from tumblr. I written their character in the story, and the artist did some of the edit.

Trouble of the Homefront

Somewhere inside the Jedi Academy library, Jedi Master Marchhare D’Writer was in the middle of reading some important documents, which were regarding some information for the upcoming meeting at the Galactic Republic.

While reading the documents, Master D’Writer noticed that his communicator was going off. He normally would have it off while inside the library, but he had it on for a moment, since he was waiting for someone that he was meant to speak with.

Master D’Writer grabbed his communicator, and then activated it. The communicator showed a hologram of his apprentice, Jedi Knight Wind Whisp. Master D’Writer was pleased to see her again, especially since she had been gone for an important mission.

He started to speak with her, and see how she been doing.

Master D’Writer smiled “Ah Wind! It so good to see my old apprentice. It has almost felt like forever since we last chatted with each other.”

Wind Whisp “It has only been two months Master D’Writer, but it good to see you too. I do apologize for the long wait to send you some messages, but I’m still in the middle of dealing with an important mission, and I don’t have much time to chat.”

Master D’Writer “Oh! And what sort of mission are you dealing with?”

Wind Whisp “One of the Jedi Masters needed my help to be their guide at my home planet of Cathar. Apparently we had some information that Count Dooku sent some spies to cause some trouble in the area. To make matter worse, one of the clone soldiers were able to spot some battle droids from a base, and might try to attack one of the nearby villages.”

Master D’Writer: “Oh dear, that does sound like a busy mission you’re dealing with. You are sure you don’t want me to help you out there?”

Wind Whisp “That would be great, but I have Master Thomas, and his daughter Jedi Knight Mia Writer to help me out.”

Master D’Writer “That is good to hear, with Master Thomas and Mia there, you should have no problem dealing with the situation. However, I’m sort of surprised that his youngest daughter, Mia is there, and not Dashie.”

Wind Whisp “Do you mean his eldest daughter, Dashie? She’s actually still at the Jedi Temple. Dashie is having some trouble dealing with her little sister, Rebecca.”

Master D’Writer “I’m guessing it has something to do with her twin sister, Mia being on a mission, and she is not with them.”

Wind Whisp: “How did you know about that?”

Master D’Writer: “I don’t need the Force to sense something is wrong.”

Wind Whisp laughed “…and that why you’re the Jedi Master. But yes, I spoke with Mia, and she told me that her twin sister didn’t pass the test and become a Jedi Knight.”

Master D’Writer “Rebecca not passing the test is odd. That girl have a lot of potential to be Jedi Knight, especially being the only few people that Master Mace Windu respects, and that man is hard to impress.”

Wind Whisp “I would believe it. Even Master Windu had a hard time dealing with my attitude at my younger years. But seriously though, I didn’t get the full detail of why Rebecca failed the Trials, but it might have something to do with her emotions.”

Master D’Writer “Do you think her control of the Force is unstable?”

Wind Whisp “Maybe. I only have a hunch. But, you know about my hunches Master, they tend to be true, but in their odd way.”

Master D’Writer thought for a moment before he answered back to Wind Whisp. He always trusted Wind hunches. Especially including the last mission they were on. Most of her hunches were able to save them from danger situations. This hunch, Wind was feeling, might be something in the Force, but he need to speak with, Rebecca, and get a better answer.

Master D’Writer looked back to Wind, and explained to her that he will speak to Rebecca. “I’m going to listen to your hunch, and have a little chat with Rebecca. Maybe, I might get a better answer, and see if I can help her.”

Wind Whisp chuckled “Are you sure you can handle that, Master? You are not exactly at your prime these days.”

Master D’Writer “Just because I’m old, doesn’t mean I cannot handle myself. Besides, I prefer to use my words, than any combat. If I know Thomas daughters, they are willing to listen to a friend of their father.”

Wind Whisp didn’t say anything else, but trusted in her master, like he had with her. Wind waved back to her Master, and turned off the communicator, and continue with her mission.

Master D’Writer thought for a second to see what he need to do, before he could confront Rebecca. He useed his communicator again, to see if he could chat with Jedi Knight Dashie.

He was able to find her, seeing her hologram self, standing by what look like the main doors to the Jedi Temple training grounds.

Master D’Writer wasn’t sure what going on, but he spoke to Dashie anyway.

Master D’Writer “Jedi Dashie, is everything going alright?

Dashie Writer: “Greetings, Master D’Writer. I wish I could say that things are fine, but I am having a tiny issue with my little sister, Rebecca.”

Master D’Writer “Did she trap herself inside the Jedi Temple training ground?”

Dashie Writer “Yes, and she was somehow able to lock the doors as well. I tried to bypass the security door, but nothing is happening. I even tried using my force powers, but it did not working. I thinkshe must be using something to block my ability.”

Master D’Writer: “She is able to block Force abilities? That is something I never heard of before.”

Dashie Writer: “Which is sort of stoping her from becoming a Jedi Knight.”

Master D’Writer: “Whatever do you mean by that?”

Dashie Writer sighed, “I shouldn’t tell you this, since dad told me to keep this a secret, but you see, Rebecca, and Mia’s mother wasn’t an ordinary person. She was one of those ancient Jedi that study both the Light and the Dark side.

Master D’Writer “Wait a moment, are you saying that their mother was Grey Jedi? As in something that Master Qui-Gon Jinn once studied?”

Dashie Writer “Yes! Rebecca, and Mia mom used to be one, and learned some of the forbidden arts that the Jedi Order don’t use anymore. Before she disappeared, she left them some scrolls, which had the teaching of the forbidden Force powers, but dad told them to never use them, no matter how good they were.”

Master D’Writer “I see. Master Thomas must have known about these forbidden Force abilities, and wanted to make sure that his daughters would never give them a try. But I still would like to know why Rebecca went against her father wishes and ued them anyways.”

Dashie Writer “Because… Rebecca wanted to be a Jedi Knight, and be her father guardian with Mia. But, Mia was a lot more skilful in both combat, and the Force, which gave her the edge she needed to be a Jedi Knight.”

Master D’Writer “…and because of that, Rebecca tried to use her mother’s trump card, and gain a tiny edge to be a Jedi Knight. There is an old saying that I once told my apprentice; whenever we use a trump card attack…”

Dashie Writer “I remember, a trump card might come in handy for tight situation, but it is never the ultimate weapon. Father always tell me that every time I tried to come up some good ideas for training.”

Master D’Writer “You see, I always try to give good advice. But now I want to give your sister some advice as well, if she is willing to listen.”

Dashie Writer “She would, but the only way she going to open those door is if Dad was here to speak with her. Unless you have some bright idea in mind, I’m all ears, Master.”

Master Writer “Hmmm I think I might. Do you still have that training droid that you built for Jedi combat training?”

Dashie Writer “You mean the prototype? I think so, but why do you ask?”

Master Writer “I have an idea, but I need you to get the training droid ready for this plan to work out.”

Dashie Writer wan’t sure why Master D’Writer wanted the droid for, but she did what he said, and went back to her quarters to get it ready.

Inside the Jedi Temple training room, Padawan Rebecca Writer was sitting in the center of the training ground, trying to use her calming meditation. However, each time she tried to clear her mind, the event of what she did from the Jedi trials kept on coming back, forcing her to remember for what she did.

Rebecca opened her eyes, and slammed her hand on the floor out of anger. Rebecca didn’t notice that her anger accidentally released her force push to knock down a few items in the area. Rebecca sighed to herself, knowing that she let her anger came out, something that she been trying to keep control.

At a young age, Rebecca had a hard time controlling her anger, especially knowing how dangerous her anger could be when she mix it with her force powers. Rebecca always relied on her friends and family for support, and in time she was able to have a better handle with it.

But once she learned that one Force move from her mother, Rebecca’s emotions had changed a bit, ad made her think about the whole thing of the Jedi Order ways.

Rebecca grabbed her lightsaber she had on the side of her belt, and activated it. The pure light from the saber was showing a dark shade of purple. Rebecca remembered getting the purple crystal from her mother as a gift, before she had gone missing.

She wanted to have a green light saber like her father, yet part of her felt that the purple saber was calling to her.

Before she had the chance to think a bit further, Rebecca felt someone was inside the training room. She had thought she had the whole place sealed, but someone, somehow, had found a way.

Rebecca didn’t bother to look, she just spoke to them, thinking it was just her older sister, Dashie here to see her.

She sighed “If you came here to lecture me, Elder sister, I’m not really in the good mood for one.

Wind Whisp “Well then, lucky for you that I’m not really the lecturing type.”

Rebecca was shocked to see her friend, Jedi Knight Wind Whisp here. She knew that Catharian had left with her twin sister not too long ago, and wouldn’t be back for months.

Rebecca got up from the floor, and switched off her lighsaber, to speak to Wind more.

She gasped “Wind! I can’t believe you’re here. I though you were on an important mission with my father and twin sister.

“Wind Whisp “I was, but when I heard rumours that some Padawan was using some forbidden force powers, I needed to stop by, and have a little chat about it.”

Rebecca Writer sighed “Not you too. Look, I already apologized for using a forbidden Force ability during the trial.”

Wind Whisp “I know that you apologized, but it still doesn’t excuse you from doing it in the first place.”

Rebecca Writer “I know, and I felt terrible for what I did. But you of all people should understand why I had to do it.”

Wind Whisp “Of course I do, Rebecca. You’re the type of person that works really hard, and wants to become a Jedi Knight.”

Rebecca Writer “Well, not only that. I also wanted to be my father’s protector. I know it sounds strange, but Mia and I made a sworn oath together that if we become Jedi Knight, we will be our father’s only protectors, and no one would try to harm our family.”

Wind Whisp “I see, and now you feel betrayed that your sister became a Jedi, and you feel left you behind. You’ve done everything in your power to become a Jedi Knight, eveing willing to use a forbidden Force power, even if it meant breaking your father trust.”

Rebecca stood quietly for a moment when Wind mentioned her father. She thought a bit longer, knowing that she had broken her father’s trust.

Wind Whisp looked at Rebecca, seeing that she was not moving at all, which gave her the opportunity to get close. Once she reached her, Wind Whisp sat down on the floor in front of Rebecca, and tried to talk to her more.

She smiled “Listen to me, Rebecca. I know you didn’t meant to harm the other Padawan from the trial, or try to break your father’s promise. But, you have to remember that there is no such thing of short cut to reach success. If you want to be a Jedi Knight, you had to remember the fundamental of becoming a Jedi.”

Rebecca fumed “I know about the fundamentals of becoming a Jedi, I study them every day. The oath, the training, the studies, I did everything that I needed to do to be a Jedi. But no matter how much and how hard I try, it wasn’t enough.”

Wind Whisp “I know you have done those thing, but there was one thing that you were missing from your training.”

Rebecca blinked “What is that?” She noticed that Whisp held up her hand, and place it by Rebecca’s chest, “Um… what are you doing?”

Wind Whisp “I’m pointing to what you were missing.”

Rebecca “Really? But I don’t understand what you mean.”

Wind Whisp laughs “It means heart, Rebecca. The number one thing that every Jedi need is the heart.”

Rebecca “…the heart. But, I don’t see that anywhere in the studies. I though all Jedi need to keep their emotions sealed away.”

Wind Whisp “That…it true. In the olden days, there was a time where the Jedi Knights once relied with their emotion to help them in tough situation. I know that emotion can lead to anger and hate, but emotion can show happiness, and love towards the people they care about. That how your twin sister was able to reach the rank of Jedi Knight. That’s how I was able to.”

Rebecca “…. I see, even with all the knowledge I had to learn to be a Jedi, my sister was lucky enough to have her emotion to find the right path to help her. But I had my emotions on the right path too, it should had helped me to become a Jedi.”

Wind Whisp “True, but you were impatient, and your emotions lead you to doing something that was the wrong path.”

Rebecca “…Wind…”

Wind Whisp sighed “Rebecca, you have to remember that you are a good Jedi, and you can reach the rank of Jedi Knight. All you have to do is try again, but you had to promise not to use that Force ability again.”

Rebecca “…but what if I try to use it again? All I want is to be a Jedi to protect my family.”

Wind Whisp “Then use that feeling. You are one of the smartest people that I know, much smarter than most of the Jedi Council.”

Rebecca grinned “Even smarter then Master Yoda?”

Wind Whisp: “Okay… maybe not at his level, but still, you will do well, just don’t bring yourself down for what you done.”

Rebecca nodded at Wind, and gave her hug, thanking her for the kind words. Wind hugged her back, but before she could say anything, her entire body started to phase out, which showing nothing more than a training droid. Rebecca looked at the training droid, and she was a little upset to see it in front of her. Rebecca got up from the floor, and demanded the training droid to tell her what it was doing here.

Rebecca “Training droid, what the meaning of this? What are you doing here, and where is Wind?

Training Droid “My apology Master Rebecca, I was following orders from Master Dashie, and helped Master De-Writer to speak with you.”

Rebecca “Tospeak with me? You’re telling me I was talking to Master De-Writer? Who was acting like, Whisp the whole time?”

Master De-Writer, spoke up “Indeed you were, and I have to say, my little plan actually worked.”

Rebecca jumped a little to see Master De-Writer was inside the Jedi Temple training room. She was about to move a bit further, but she felt someone was standing behind her. That someone was happened to be her older sister, Dashie. Dashie smiled at her, letting her know that she was not going anywhere.

Dashie Writer: “Nice try Becky, but you’re not going anywhere this time.”

Rebecca “Sister? Master? How you were able to get inside?”

Master De-Writer “While we were talking, you had to lower your guard down a little, which gave your sister enough time to unlock the doors, and gain access the training room.”

Rebecca “I can’t believe you guys would do something like this.”

Dashie Writer “We didn’t need to do that kind of tactics, if you had just let us in, and so that we could talk about what happened.”

Rebecca “I know, but I just needed some space is all. I’m not in the mood to be lectured all the time.”

Master De-Writer: “We know, that why I talked to you in more of a friendly approach. Of course, I had to use the training droid, and use the holo image of my former apprentice. However, it got the job done.”

Rebecca “Of course it did, but your words were wise as always. Thank you for talking to me. As a friend, not a Padawan”

Master De-Writer bowed “My pleasure, Rebecca. Just remember that you have friends that will always help you, and the Force to guide you as well.”

Rebecca “Indeed.”

Dashie Writer spoke up “But the Force won’t protect you from all the trouble you have done. The next two weeks you’re going to be mopping the Jedi training room, and double training as well.”

Rebecca frowned. “Oh, come on! Can’t you give me a little break?”

Dashie Writer “Want me to make three weeks?

Rebecca “…No Ma'am.”

Dashie Writer “No ma'am?”

Rebecca sighed “No Master Dashie.”

Dashie Writer smiled “That’s more like it.”

The End.

This story was done for ask-de-writer and wind-the-mama-cat