Hoping to begin writing more TF stories so what's a better way to begin than to post a few excerpts of Transformation roleplays I've written.
Feedback is welcome. Only way to improve is to know what I'm doing wrong, and correct it.

The Calming Waves
2nd Person Anthro Shark Transformation


Your body submerges beneath the waves, the water caressing your body. The movements of the waves relaxing to the touch with the coldness of the water acting to the numb the severe pain across your body. Unable to breath, everything seems to go dark for a moment before a searing burning feeling his felt long the sides of your neck. Soon, you can feel yourself breathing again. As if you've never jumped in in the first place. Three long horizontal holes lining each side of your neck, taking in the water surrounding you allowing you to be able to breath again. The skin around your now gills feels different as the water sways across it. Sleek silver skin spreading around the area until the entire back of your neck is covered by it. The front of your neck taking on a much brighter white; a sharp contrast to the silverish gray. Skin slowly beginning to grow up and down from your neck, spreading much slower along your head compared to the flesh going downward. Already reaching your chest and shoulders. The skin slimming down your body, removing excess fat and hair along your chest and stomach to allow the body to be swim through the water easier. Soon the skin completely covering your torso and back, a clear line along your sides dividing the smooth gray and white flesh. The skin creeping down your shoulders and down through your arms. Doing the same as the chest and stomach, slowly breaking down to allow the body to become more streamline along the water. The water feeling strangely nice along the changed features, coming with it a soothing relaxing feeling. It's as if the transformation or the moment had slowed as the wave's strokes brush along the changed skin. Time freezing for a moment before the spell of the water is soon broken. Sharp pain is felt on your fingers, bringing you out of the relaxing daze. Once perfect nails now growing out into sharp claws pointed at the tip. The claws the same color as the skin across the back of your hand. White colored flesh remaining on the wrist and palm of your hands.
The webbing between the fingers begins to grow out until each finger is connected by a thin layer of skin. Shortly after the webbing finishes forming, the sharp familiar pain that had brought you out of your trance is felt again, this time on the other hand. Faster than the left hand had changed, the right managed to grow it's claws out much faster. The thin layer of skin forming again, connecting each finger along your hand until it reaches just short of the end of your fingers. Gray colored cartilage spreading down your back faster than the white running down your stomach. The gray reaching your hips before the white does. A strong pulling sensation coming from your spine, a nub of flesh beginning to form at the end of your tailbone. The tugging, pulling sensation becoming stronger as the growing limb hits a growth spurt. It begins to sway idly back and forth, nerves branching out until soon it stops moving. Thickening at the base as it slowly grows out longer. Cartilage slimming down your legs as well, removing fat and hairs until they are covered in gray on the sides and white on the insides facing toward each other. Familiar flesh binding and growing out from in-between your toes, a sharp pain felt as the gray skin reaches your toes. Sharp claws forming from your old toenails. Lining forming between the toes beginning to grow out until both toes are bound together with a thin layer of skin. A jolt felt across your entire body as the tail gets another growth spurt, growing out much longer until it is almost the same size as you. Right when it seems it is about to be the match your size, it spans out into a fluke. Branching outward up and down, running perpendicular to your body.
Extreme pain is felt, pausing the amazing sensation the new limb brings with a skull crushing pain. Teeth once set comfortable in your jaws beginning to fall out and gently fall to the ocean floor. Sharp new canines replacing the holes left behind. Soon, your entire mouth is lined with razor sharp incisors capable of shredding any meat. They sit comfortable until a strong pulling motion pulls your mouth and nose forward into a short snout. More teeth forming at the back of your mouth once more room as been made. With the short snout, comes a new world of scents scattered across the ocean. The scent of fish, and more particular the blood spilled by them forming a form of scent trail from recently deceased prey. Sight growing remarkably better, better suited for staring through the water. Another intense pain is felt as the skull reshapes to become much more broad. The top of the skull flattening out slightly, until after what felt like hours of serious pain, it subsides. Feeling like the transformation is over, a sharp pain is felt on your back. A large dorsal fin forming on your back between your shoulder blades. And with the growth of the final limb, the transformation ends. Soon, the world grows calm again. Water gently caressing your body again, and with it, a feeling of serenity returns. The waves of the water causing everything to freeze again, leaving only the effects of the ocean’s waves.