Last page of chapter one! Man, the inking is just all over the place on this page. I was sick most all christmas break and this page was unfortunate enough to be caught in an "inking with a fever" experiment. So, I apologize for the smudges and all. >_< Gah, I hate that last panel.

See ya'll in chapter two!

*EDIT* I forgot to say! Please give me your opinions. I really do listen and I try to impliment the suggestions that I feel apply. :3 So yes, constructive crit is encouraged. I wanna know what to look out for and things I might need to fix in chapter two and all. Your input is important! :D