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Yeah, I am surprised with how quickly I wrote this story, too! While my previous stories took several months to complete, this one took less than a week! :O Woo-hoo, new record! *high-fives myself!*
This story is another Big Kev story, expounding upon his "day before my day-off" ritual, showing more of his "gentle giant" persona, and how his obesity affects his physical health. The subject of fatfurs experiencing pain as a direct result of their obesity is one that I do not see a lot in fatfur literature. Personally, I think it makes sense - a creature who weighs roughly half a ton more than his/her species' average weight should feel at least a bit of pain. If the subject is too "realistic" for you, then I will respect your opinion.
I also introduce Moon Beach as a location in the Mirai Region, expanding this world I have created for my OCs to populate.
Given the fact that I typed all of this out in a matter of days, one thing I am worried about is whether I rushed certain things, or left certain aspects of the story vague. I think I did well! I also worry that, although the story is another "slice of life" short, if it is too generic and... boring. I think I added in some neat detail to compensate, though!
If there is anything you particularly enjoy about this story, or something you feel I need to improve upon, please let me know in the comments section down below!
All species of pokemon featured are copyright of The Pokemon Company and Nintendo.
All characters featured are copyright of FatalCalamityz - me!
Update, 9/3: WTH?! Three weeks and 200 views already?! Two freakin' hundred?! WOW!!! Thank you all so, so much!
This story is another Big Kev story, expounding upon his "day before my day-off" ritual, showing more of his "gentle giant" persona, and how his obesity affects his physical health. The subject of fatfurs experiencing pain as a direct result of their obesity is one that I do not see a lot in fatfur literature. Personally, I think it makes sense - a creature who weighs roughly half a ton more than his/her species' average weight should feel at least a bit of pain. If the subject is too "realistic" for you, then I will respect your opinion.
I also introduce Moon Beach as a location in the Mirai Region, expanding this world I have created for my OCs to populate.
Given the fact that I typed all of this out in a matter of days, one thing I am worried about is whether I rushed certain things, or left certain aspects of the story vague. I think I did well! I also worry that, although the story is another "slice of life" short, if it is too generic and... boring. I think I added in some neat detail to compensate, though!
If there is anything you particularly enjoy about this story, or something you feel I need to improve upon, please let me know in the comments section down below!
All species of pokemon featured are copyright of The Pokemon Company and Nintendo.
All characters featured are copyright of FatalCalamityz - me!
Update, 9/3: WTH?! Three weeks and 200 views already?! Two freakin' hundred?! WOW!!! Thank you all so, so much!
Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Pokemon
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 17 kB
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