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Good Men V (and women, herms and such …) [not complete....
Since my muse currently refuses to move onward with my silly excuse for a tale, we bring you a little something different. As it is just a bit piece to understand it you will have needed to have read up on my chapter/book 4 up to Neal cleaning House, and Boyce’s Loosing the Maelstrom http://www.furry.org.au/chakat/Stor.....inesSpeech.htm . This story follows mere days after it.
Be advised that this story has not been approved by Boyce or Goldie, just this nutcase writer venturing a possible outcome.
Should be just one more bit after this.
Be advised that this story has not been approved by Boyce or Goldie, just this nutcase writer venturing a possible outcome.
Should be just one more bit after this.
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... willing to let Foster yank us out of our academy pre-classes to come after you …”
I would have worded it: ...pre-academy classes... , but that's just me and my military background.
“So, barely started the pre-academy already a captain now are we?” his father asked with a raised eyebrow.
Add an and?
his daughter said eying him curiously.
Spellchek Alert! Needs another e.
As for the current ending... I think it should be some combination of affirmatives.
... willing to let Foster yank us out of our academy pre-classes to come after you …”
I would have worded it: ...pre-academy classes... , but that's just me and my military background.
“So, barely started the pre-academy already a captain now are we?” his father asked with a raised eyebrow.
Add an and?
his daughter said eying him curiously.
Spellchek Alert! Needs another e.
As for the current ending... I think it should be some combination of affirmatives.
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