Dgirael is the illustrator for for Egging Vasya On, whose part 1 dealt with discovering your own skills... and putting them to use... just as the original story of "Vasilisa The Beautiful" that it was inspired from.

https://www.furaffinity.net/gallery.....gging-Vasya-On

She did these changes as a gift to me which... really moved me 😭👍💖

I always knew that chapter 1 was rushed but i never knew how to fix it. Also, the change from office to wilderness was... jarring at best.

Mighty Ybaba ( https://twitter.com/mcnostrilcom https://www.patreon.com/mcnostril/ ) kindly helped me on discord to sort out the problem and "rewrite" what was wrong with it.

Sooo... here it is. The rewritten pages! I hope the story now flows better.

Other than being the illustrator, some of the characters have been first brought to "life" by  Dgirael
• support the artist here: https://ko-fi.com/dgirael
• artist page: https://www.furaffinity.net/user/dgirael/
• commission info: https://www.furaffinity.net/gallery...../611440/prices