This is another piece of prose i wrote, this time it was inspired by
duke317's post http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3782513/
as a side note, the "we" i refer to is the general we and not the specific we
formatting is kinda squirly because of FA
I submitted this to a local publication. the edition submitted has had further editing
duke317's post http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3782513/as a side note, the "we" i refer to is the general we and not the specific we
formatting is kinda squirly because of FA
I submitted this to a local publication. the edition submitted has had further editing
Category Poetry / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 1.4 kB
might be worth finding a thesaurus if i plan to make a habit of this sort of thing :P
however the "cradled in the arms of" was intentional. the space part wasn't cause i had not really thought about it until you said somethin about it
Thank you for the input though it is helpful
if you're interested http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/1340105/ has a list of the stories i've written
however the "cradled in the arms of" was intentional. the space part wasn't cause i had not really thought about it until you said somethin about it
Thank you for the input though it is helpful
if you're interested http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/1340105/ has a list of the stories i've written
i've always had a problem with tenses, as well as general grammar XD
granted, i also didn't proof read it before i posted it XD I'm sure if i had done that i wouldn't have had as many problems XD
thanks for the heads up on the stuff though, i plan to submit this to a periodical thing the college here does on a semi-annual basis
granted, i also didn't proof read it before i posted it XD I'm sure if i had done that i wouldn't have had as many problems XD
thanks for the heads up on the stuff though, i plan to submit this to a periodical thing the college here does on a semi-annual basis
as do i, i've always wanted to get published, and i figured this would be as good a chance as any. I really want to be an author, but i like eating.... so i think i'll do it on the side and continue with the Industrial tech field that i'm majoring in :P
I also addededed you on yim. mines uberlonewolf just so you know if/when it comes across
I also addededed you on yim. mines uberlonewolf just so you know if/when it comes across
i've always had a problem with tenses, as well as general grammar XD
granted, i also didn't proof read it before i posted it XD I'm sure if i had done that i wouldn't have had as many problems XD
thanks for the heads up on the stuff though, i plan to submit this to a periodical thing the college here does on a semi-annual basis
granted, i also didn't proof read it before i posted it XD I'm sure if i had done that i wouldn't have had as many problems XD
thanks for the heads up on the stuff though, i plan to submit this to a periodical thing the college here does on a semi-annual basis
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