Other than being incredibly hard to see, I think it's lookin' good.

try to calibrate your monitors, uncalibrated monitors then to be too hard to see.

http://www.lagom.nl/lcd-test/gamma_calibration.php

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3796062/

It's looking a lot better, the table perspective is better and his muzzle looks much better now.

The arms still look a bit odd though and I think the background guy has too small a body for his head or too large a head for his body.

The perspective is definitely improving though.

I was thinking that (the big head, tiny body) will rebuild it next sketch!
as for the arms.. wich of the two? or both? o_O

can you redline?

The guy who dropped coffee down his trousers. (I can barely remember the names of the main characters, let alone the secondary characters unfortunately ;P) I think it's mostly that the position of the arms looks awkward and somewhat unnatural.

Unfortunately I cannot do redline's currently, my pc just decided it hates my tablet for some unknown reason; I'm getting my new pc within the month and once I've got it set up and my tablet installed on it, I'll be able to redline.

well I'm not sure because I cant see whats wrong with it. I will need redlining to see it.
(infact, I used to make that same position of hands when someone drops on my pants when eating food D: )
its like "aaah damn shit.. look at this!" (while looking down and both hands to the sides... :P

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3796062/