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What did Ludhos see...?
This is my first animation I've ever done. If you have some feedback, I'd gladly hear it~ I want to become better in animating!
Category All / All
Species Dinosaur
Size 1000 x 1000px
File Size 1.77 MB
Listed in Folders
This is really cool animation! It's maybe a bit complex (for a first) so there are alot of small funky stuff, but it still reads nicely and works!
The legs jitter around a lot. Especially in the end when moving to the last pose the leg on the right (the left leg) has a big shudder.
It feels to me like there's a lot of bouncing and wiggling there and I too, when animating, do put all sorts of wiggles and rebounds in the animation, just to find that it'd be less restless without.
You seem to have the notion down where, when the eye moves a lot, it blinks. I think you could have it blink for the first time on the first instant of glancing right and you could have the expression change to the mad one before we go into the swoop to the right.
But still, oh boy this is cool for a first one! I hope you keep at it and make more! :>
The legs jitter around a lot. Especially in the end when moving to the last pose the leg on the right (the left leg) has a big shudder.
It feels to me like there's a lot of bouncing and wiggling there and I too, when animating, do put all sorts of wiggles and rebounds in the animation, just to find that it'd be less restless without.
You seem to have the notion down where, when the eye moves a lot, it blinks. I think you could have it blink for the first time on the first instant of glancing right and you could have the expression change to the mad one before we go into the swoop to the right.
But still, oh boy this is cool for a first one! I hope you keep at it and make more! :>
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