This story was a request from http://ageaus.deviantart.com/ .

Based on a five picture sequence done by him that you can see here:
0% - http://ageaus.deviantart.com/art/Ch.....ge-1-166267194
25% - http://ageaus.deviantart.com/art/Ch.....ge-2-166267369
50% - http://ageaus.deviantart.com/art/Ch.....ge-3-166267516
75% - http://ageaus.deviantart.com/art/Ch.....ge-4-166267742
100% - http://ageaus.deviantart.com/art/Ch.....ge-5-166268284

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Writing from a completely third-person perspective is harder than it looks.
Still, it was good practice though.

Not too much to say about this really. Pretty much a nice simple TF.
Ageaus’s choice of creature from that sequence was brilliant and very original, so I'm glad that I was given a chance to work with it myself.
As for the trigger for the TF, it was based on an idea that had popped into my head because I'd been playing Donkey Kong Country (1-3) lately. In those games, one of your animal friends is a swordfish, and in some levels, you jump into a barrel and become the swordfish (Named: Enguarde). This is accompanied by the barrel shaking and then exploding.
So I just adapted that idea for the story, and I think it worked well.

Hope you like it. Please, leave a comment.