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So I am working on this sprite of Ophira to in turn making into a Perler bead sprite.
I am just wondering if you think anything could be change.
It was made from this image: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/38006474/ So I had to figure out what to do with the left arm. I also changed the shading since the shaded parts of her skin would be solid black and the way it's done here it won't just look like bit sections of solid black.
So if anyone has some ideas on what I can do with her arms, the frill on her clothes and stuff like that let me know.
I am just wondering if you think anything could be change.
It was made from this image: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/38006474/ So I had to figure out what to do with the left arm. I also changed the shading since the shaded parts of her skin would be solid black and the way it's done here it won't just look like bit sections of solid black.
So if anyone has some ideas on what I can do with her arms, the frill on her clothes and stuff like that let me know.
Category All / Hyper
Species Exotic (Other)
Size 579 x 654px
File Size 16 kB
I think it looks wonderful thus far! The shading is on point, and, I've said this before but I'll casually restate: She's very pretty~ The frills look excellent and overall I love her model and curves!
If there is anything to be done, I believe the eyeballs could use just the slightest adjustment, and of course the arms could be a bit thicker, and maybe slopped down a bit more?
It shows promise, and I can't wait to see the perler~!
Also the spear is cool!
If there is anything to be done, I believe the eyeballs could use just the slightest adjustment, and of course the arms could be a bit thicker, and maybe slopped down a bit more?
It shows promise, and I can't wait to see the perler~!
Also the spear is cool!
This isn't exact, but it should give you a good idea: https://i.imgur.com/obVExsA.jpeg
I do understand the desire to make certain limbs seem petite, likely to contrast to the hyper proportionality of the rest of the body. I believe that in this case, extending them and repositioning them ever so slightly would make the overall frame just a little bit more proportional.
Take that as you will, I mean who am I to talk about proportions when I specialize in freakin' hyper? lmao
I do understand the desire to make certain limbs seem petite, likely to contrast to the hyper proportionality of the rest of the body. I believe that in this case, extending them and repositioning them ever so slightly would make the overall frame just a little bit more proportional.
Take that as you will, I mean who am I to talk about proportions when I specialize in freakin' hyper? lmao
By the way made some edits:
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachme.....a_sprite_6.png
I didn't change the eyes as I tried version things and what I have works the best.
The arms though I tried two different lengths. I favor the "medium" length as it looks the best to me.
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachme.....a_sprite_6.png
I didn't change the eyes as I tried version things and what I have works the best.
The arms though I tried two different lengths. I favor the "medium" length as it looks the best to me.
A few more changes.
I thickened her biceps, I altered the trim on her clothes to all be the same basic thing instead of the frilly stuff as the frill looks meh at the small scale.
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachme.....a_sprite_8.png
What do you think?
I thickened her biceps, I altered the trim on her clothes to all be the same basic thing instead of the frilly stuff as the frill looks meh at the small scale.
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachme.....a_sprite_8.png
What do you think?
You know about that you might consider playing around with clothing a little more! Frills are all well and good, but what can really make a drawing distinct is a change up in the overall modeling of the clothes! I'm sure you have a pretty good idea on what you want for this character. Just a suggestion ~
Oh yeah, those are some great outfits! Gets me thinking up some ideas myself!
Do understand that I actually really love the outfit you've hit upon with Ophira right now. I believe its sexy, endearing, and also kind of cute, in a revealing way. Only I believe that variation is key when doing multiple drawings of the same character, something I'm sure you're equally aware of.
Do understand that I actually really love the outfit you've hit upon with Ophira right now. I believe its sexy, endearing, and also kind of cute, in a revealing way. Only I believe that variation is key when doing multiple drawings of the same character, something I'm sure you're equally aware of.
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