They feel good. There's such a huge difference in this from much of what else I've written and I like that, just as I like the juxtaposition of power and powerlessness between them, and how Shimyree demonstrates that old adage, the submissive controlling the agenda in a sense. Her Love's day, her celebration, her dress, her desires, her Love. This is an old favorite tragedy of mine, so I look forwards to seeing just where you take these two and how you handle their confusion, their contusion, their chaos.

my dear friend is trying very hard to warn shimyree off assuming shimyree underestimates her breacher nature

my dear friend might be underestimating shimyree's breacher nature

A predator is often blind to its own peril.

I am not always good at following the twisting mazes of your characters and world/s but I like these two a lot and enjoy when I see them again.

A shallow but not insignificant part of this is the moon liquid wearing a fake skin, and imagining the phrase " Your skin isn't fitting you" in a very literal sense. But that's just the crack in the door that gets me reading all that lovely dialogue, and my favourite things you write are when characters try to talk out the big issues on their minds with each other.

ah thank you thank you!

everyone is at least sorted by World and Character in the folders, so it's

it's not the WORST, navigating my henry darger mess here,

it's not as bad as it could be at least

This is true, and I think I've mentioned before that being a little lost isn't the worst thing. I kind of like only being half aware of things and still getting value out of it all. Brief little windows into rich and dense alien worlds and relationships.

I don't entirely understand everything (but like, in a good way), but I enjoyed reading it, and I like these characters.

if anything ever IS confusing i will answer for it answer explain it

I've had this sitting in a tab waiting to have the energy to Read Things and I'm glad I finally got around to it because "alien monstrosity feels bizarre kinship with a mortal and they both parse their feelings through the lenses of their own unique psychologies" is SUCH a good trope.

they are both horrible disasters, it's ideal

one's a breacher that wishes she were mortal, but not really

the other's a mortal that's into being a breacher,

but not really

between them they create one whole person??

Big mood
Same