Cool. :) I like.

thanks

Comic-book fare, which is what I've been reading more of lately :D Some grammatical mistakes like "grown" where you mean "groan," etc., but didn't detract - just gave me pause sometimes.

thanks for catching the typo, I've corrected it. if you find more feel free to let me know.

and yeah, this is definitely more 'comic book' than anything I've written. I think the fact that it's in a world of super powered beings helps :)

For all his time spent behind his desk he was a well build built man -- might also want comma after desk.

He'd had one of his researcher researchers compile a ...

During that time the Terrorist destroyed an oil refinery in Forth Worth -- Did you mean Fort Worth? If so, you made the error twice.

Eliza was among the best looking girl girls in our year, I mean even *I* had noticed how much of a looker she's she'd become.

I didn't often get to look at a well build built guy without looking suspicious doing it.

She indicated one of the two square bucket buckets against the wall.

"How much does it weight weigh?"

I put another slap slab in each bucket.

...bouncing of off it he moved a little more and then fell apart.

...and the skin had broken in place places.

Maggie could have been really hurt, or worst worse.

I guess I've joined the team *chuckles*

thanks again. I've corrected them.

And you've joined the GOOD team :)

Another cool installment of the story!
Very interesting with the comic book style, and the plot gets thicker hehe.
Nice work.

thank you, I'm glad you are enjoying this