Anatomy flails but at least the paws look half decent.
Paint Tool SAI with edits in Photoshop CS4
Pose ref: its here
Character © to me
Paint Tool SAI with edits in Photoshop CS4
Pose ref: its here
Character © to me
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Dog (Other)
Size 550 x 750px
File Size 391 kB
It looks decent but:
**CRITIQUE**
I'm sure you're already aware the arms look like they are malnourished, or at the very least, deformed in relation to the rest of the body. The thickness of her neck, along with the extra-thick ankles (though i'm not sure if they're supposed to be that way or not).
The rest, well.. the body is good, the hands are good, the face looks nice and as you said, the paws came out decent. About the only flaws are what i already mentioned.
If anything else, i recommend practicing on cleaning up the line art, because even thickness in lines and smooth curves can make a hell of a difference to how an image looks. Also experiment with using different line widths when denoting any foreshortening or enhancing details, thicker or thinner respectfully.
Otherwise, you're doing well, keep up the good work (=
**CRITIQUE**
I'm sure you're already aware the arms look like they are malnourished, or at the very least, deformed in relation to the rest of the body. The thickness of her neck, along with the extra-thick ankles (though i'm not sure if they're supposed to be that way or not).
The rest, well.. the body is good, the hands are good, the face looks nice and as you said, the paws came out decent. About the only flaws are what i already mentioned.
If anything else, i recommend practicing on cleaning up the line art, because even thickness in lines and smooth curves can make a hell of a difference to how an image looks. Also experiment with using different line widths when denoting any foreshortening or enhancing details, thicker or thinner respectfully.
Otherwise, you're doing well, keep up the good work (=
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